Bro could you review my novel, X season 1

Bro did you add my story to your collections. Just askin

lol, fourth wall break in the first chapter. Loving it

First, thanks for commenting. Second, it just comes while writing. I try to make it small, but sometimes the scene is just that long. The reason why most novels in here have short paras are probably bcz they have a system or some other gimmick that breaks the para. Unfortunately, this story does not have one.

Ty

Bro, can you review my book. Doesn't matter if it is bad, just don't. please

Yeah, I like it. There are some slight problems with English, but I mean...who cares.

sure, already doing it. Started first chapter today, but could not finish chap 1. Will read the rest later, I promise.

IKR. plz, read my novel if you have the time

Bro, which chapter are you in right now. Plz leave a comment like this so I know that you like it.

You know, it is fine without edits. At this point, all comments made are for other viewers to understand the problems. Make this chap 1 for all the newbies.

It's the other way around, but it's alright. Thx for the chapter

Man, I thought you would not post since yesterday's chill out, but thank you. ps. My novel has almost reached 10 k views, please do read it.

ya man. it's fine we understand. post when possible

Well, sorry just had some extra time. The other chapters are all smaller.

Bro, thanks for the like. Will you read my novel?

THIS IS OMNISCIENT READER'S VIEWPOINT. I HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO GIVE IT 5 STARS. ps. please read my novel X-season 1. Might not be close to this masterpiece, but I promise that it will give you a good time

Could you rate my book? It's called X-season 1. Please, I need someones opinion on why it's not getting any views.

You seem to be a good critic. Can you please review my book next? It's called X-season 1

As the author, I have no choice but to give 5 stars. But otherwise, I still would have given the same rating. If you are looking for something different from the ordinary, boring cliche stories in which there is an edgy MC that depends on luck in a lifeless world. Please read it and leave a review. There are side characters that are not fodder in this story.