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ChasingSunMoon5dRespondeu a SovereignOfDarcYou can consider the previous one as a rough draft. In this version, I will execute certain events more realistically. I will also fix some plot holes and other things that I failed to explain properly previously. For old readers like you, I will make sure the overall story is still the same, but I still recommend you reread it to prevent any confusion in the future. I have also explained the main reason for it in the last chapter of the previous book. Notable changes occur at the end of chapter 5 and the beginning of chapter 6. In the end, I will kindly request you to improve the rating. It’s really not easy to write a novel, and bad ratings are really discouraging.
- ChasingSunMoon14dRespondeu a ProTect_LoLi
Please note that I have specified "physical body alone"
As Lei Kongming looked at his body, the first thing he noticed was that the strength of his physical body alone was now equal to the 1st level of the Qi refining realm. Although it was a small improvement, it was significant considering it was the effect of eating just one piece of eel meat.detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon - ChasingSunMoon14dRespondeu a
I'm referring to his physical body, not his Qi cultivation.
As Lei Kongming looked at his body, the first thing he noticed was that the strength of his physical body alone was now equal to the 1st level of the Qi refining realm. Although it was a small improvement, it was significant considering it was the effect of eating just one piece of eel meat.detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon - ChasingSunMoon18dRespondeu a ProTect_LoLi
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"I don't have a space ring, so I asked Brother Long to keep my clothes, but we got separated during the trials."detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon - ChasingSunMoon22dRespondeu a ProTect_LoLiCh 25 Good KickdetailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon
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Hey everyone, I want to talk about this book I’ve been working on and I’m eager to hear your thoughts. Don’t hold back—whether it’s advice, ideas, or pointing out errors (like spelling or plot-related), I’m open to it all. Let’s collaborate and make this book the best it can be!
detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon - ChasingSunMoon1mthRespondeu a SovereignOfDarc
The reason the POV changes to Lei Longwei is to develop his character.
"Don't worry, come with me; your brother will help you become a man," Lei Longwei said as he continued moving towards the entrance while talking to Lei Kongming.detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon - ChasingSunMoon1mthRespondeu a
It's Lei Kongming. Lei Longwei is a supporting character and will accompany the MC during the early levels of the novel.
"Don't worry, come with me; your brother will help you become a man," Lei Longwei said as he continued moving towards the entrance while talking to Lei Kongming.detailSo, am I responsible for the harmonious relationship between heroines?Oriental · ChasingSunMoon