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READ TILL 270 CHAPTER, It has everything a great story should have. No bullshit, No useless dialogue, some struggle etc. And it is unique in its own way.

Chapter size has decreased for the last few chapters.🥲

Man I know you love to write everything in detail but is there any need for explaining the same thing again and again. You at least wrote that he can't show them his full power from 3-4 different prospective. Man do you really need to try that hard to make more chapters? And he is the greatest genius but how the hell did he not hear what the old man said "he said there are 9 circles" and each one of them took many years to complete... Then why does he have to try that hard to appear a little genius can't just show he had completed the first circle and be done with it. You really want to waste our time.

IDIOT BIG BRAIN Protagonist who keeps trying to build harem for another guy. Super annoying.

I can check how long that guy will be the wing man for that J guy. I am at 35 but it's already annoying. And you said even after 100 chapters it doesn't change but it was really a waste of my time🤢

He is completely useless even after 300 episodes he is still understanding himself. He wastes time debating about saving his partner. The writer's sea of corpses doesn't even include 100 dead bodies

PLEASE EXPERIENCE THE WORLD WRITER. I don't know much about you but I am one thing for certain that you have very little social interaction in your life. Most of the social conversation in the story is very very awkward. It's almost as if you don't know how to talk with someone. And your logic is sometimes too flawed. I CAN'T DENY YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER. The story is interesting and the world building is also good but the moral logic and social interactions are really bad.

I AM CURRENTLY IN CHAPTER 71, I DON'T KNOW IF YOU HAVE IMPROVED OR NOT BUT YOUR WRITING STYLE IS DUMB. I think you have heard it many times already as I have seen many other people have said the same thing but it's really irritating to read. Your story is great and interesting and the world building has a lot of potential but man please change your writing style, You add too much extra details then it needs to be. Where one or two sentences explain a situation you make it a complete section. And complex sentences are your favorite but please do it in moderation. You wish to make every simple sentence into a complex sentence. It's super boring.