WildCatMan
A random guy with a simple taste.
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I don't care about low ratings, except for the unreasonable ones, so don't apologize, I know how crappy the main character is and how shitty the system works. You can read it right from the review I gave, in fact, just a few days ago. But grammar, huh? I'll pass you the "I'm not a native English speaker" card. What I did was write the story from my language, translated it through DeepL and edited it, and then uploaded it. About quoting MC's thoughts from ([ & ]) instead of (' & '), it's simply because it's easier for me to write it. Still, where did you get the idea that the heroine has to get into trouble for the main character to get their diary heroine? Taking the story seriously is a bit of a mistake. And I wasn't trying to quickly give ALL the heroine to the main character, or introducing them in a riotous manner. Up to Chapter 24 (Spoiler), he has 8 Diaries with slow introductions to the respective characters in question, and his relationship with them is established as best as I can. What's so weird about the main character not being able to leave the person who's about to die? Remember that it's a POV 1. Why do you think I have to write all the reasons for the main character's actions as clearly as possible? There is such a thing as character development, and actually, not even long after Chapter 8, he already gave the answer to the question of "why" he can't just leave Ai to die, or why he acted to establish relationships with people of his age.
Apathetic MC is boring, honestly, and since I hadn't write for about two to three months since Chapter 15/16, I just couldn't help but think "Why the hell did I create such a boring MC?"
You can tell me. I won't just force them into the story right away, but I could make them appear step by step.
That whole Chapter feels cringe🤧
Nanako Onodera
Dari Fans Page Facebook. Lupa namanya apa, tapi mereka ngasih Ilustrasi AI Karakter Anime berseragam Sekolah Indonesia.
It's an Alternate Universe. She's the same old Ichinose but just not enrolled in ANHS/CoTE's Universe.
Ichika Nakano