optimistic_writer
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optimistic_writer16hRespondeu a optimistic_writerCh 17 Besting my monster and falling again...- optimistic_writer16hRespondeu a optimistic_writer
Im not gonna do danmachi, but smth else. Something that's similar to one story, so I'll see how it goes. Im asking the author, but if he doesn't respond, Imma just carry on with it. Not like Im earing anything from this :D
Ch 17 Besting my monster and falling again... - optimistic_writer17hRespondeu a GuiltythreeCh 875 Old Roads
- optimistic_writer17hRespondeu a Guiltythree
Guilty, do u mind if I use some of the parts of the story for something I wanna write? This story really has my mind going on what I can do. Like, going to sleep to battle in dreams? That stuff's got all sorts of things to brought from it and more.
Ch 875 Old Roads - optimistic_writer5dComentou
Da faq?
He also discovered that she did not use a bra or underpants. - optimistic_writer9dRespondeu a Gremmy_Th0umeauxCh 5 Trip to below
- optimistic_writer9dRespondeu a Gremmy_Th0umeauxCh 5 Trip to below
- optimistic_writer9dComentouCh 17 Besting my monster and falling again...
- optimistic_writer10dComentou
He's an uncle I would love having, hands down
Nappa swiveled his head toward Gohan so fast he almost snapped his neck. His eyes were sparkling as if Gohan had told him that Frieza Day would come early. Unable to contain his excitement, he shot into the sky with surprising speed for an injured individual. - optimistic_writer10dComentou
Bruh, raditz is smart. I dont know how u guys think hes dumb
"I see," Raditz muttered aloud. "If this is the case, then Kakarot has actually made a smart decision. Honestly, I can't fault him for that. Probably would've done the same if I were in his situation." - optimistic_writer11dRespondeu a Xseno_RainCh 16 (Question) Is the story alright, and if not, what can be improved?
- optimistic_writer11dRespondeu a Xseno_Rain
Oh, I see what you mean. That does hold some country twang to it. (ill be honest, I have a lot of southern american in me, so sometimes my words come out in a country accent. So I guess this works...I suppose
'I walked over to him and patted his shoulder.' "I don't really mind the profession. Those type's of things never really grossed me out. I mean, some just do it to do it." 'Mom always taught me to respect ones profession.' - optimistic_writer11dRespondeu a
Southern accent? I...Imma watch a video with someone having an accent and see what u mean by that
'I walked over to him and patted his shoulder.' "I don't really mind the profession. Those type's of things never really grossed me out. I mean, some just do it to do it." 'Mom always taught me to respect ones profession.' - optimistic_writer12dRespondeu a Zhawan2002
SCREW DRAGONBALL! FIGHT FOR THE EMPEROR! DOWN WITH CHAOS!
Jason's face reverts back to its original blank appearance before muttering, "Oh god no..." - optimistic_writer12dComentou
If you see something that seems like a spelling mistake, or just a written mistake, please point it out. I'll be going over the chapter in a bit to see if I can spruce it up, make it a bit more...presentable...? Eh, I'll see what I can do
Ch 17 Besting my monster and falling again... - optimistic_writer12dComentou'All this depressing thought's is really not something I should be thinking over. Damn it Z, think happy thoughts! Kittens and rainbows, delicious chocolate chip cookies with a nice cold cup of milk to dip them in! Mmm~, ...chocolate...' *GerwrRrRr~~~* 'I looked down to my gut, running a hand over my belly.'