Well quality over quantity. .

I don't know where you are from, but I'm sure even your country would sacrifice innocent people who are worthless to protect the Noble and rich people. it's the way world has been from the start. Your worth is decided by who you are and where you come from

it was a figure of speech, the room was white and humongous And it made it seem like Headmaster was standing in space he wasn't actually standing in space

that's exactly the point I'm trying to make

I apologize for grammatical mistakes, my editor made a whole lot of mistakes. I am trying to reread the whole thing and fix those mistakes

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Yes, exactly.

The neighbor was standing outside the house and was watching Ariel and his dead family when the guys altered everyone's memory. They did change his memory but at the same time he was living the scene they wanted to change that's the reason didn't forget. by the end of chapter he starts doubting his memory.

they will be taken care of real soon and thank you for your response

Well, that's the point. It was a good hook I believe. Your thoughts?

I wanted to spare you all the info dump. that's why I thought it's better to give you explanation of things in more entertaining way, like during the fight. but since you've asked, You see Aurians are born with no Prodigy, but they activate it by giving something to Elderis. There are 6 Houses, main Houses, all have different attributes, meaning different style of Prodigy. as for Augmentum, it's one of the Houses. people if this house has the attribute to increase or decrease something. Like increasing their own strength, decreasing size of something, someone or their own. They can practically increase or decrease anything. just like Amir increased the weight of those rocks and made a hole in a thick wall. So in short, Attributes are styles of Prodigy which are determined by in which Clan/House you were born in. .. Augmentum Inventum Dynamo Elysium Transcendere etc are a few of the Great/ Noble Houses.

I've read your comment and you pointed out quite a few mistakes that my editor missed. I thank you for that, this is just a draft and I'm still working on it. I thank you for pointing out flaws. Please keep doing so, I write for you. and I'm a new writer with poor grammar, learning English wasn't my main concern growing up.

You got the wrong idea, argument is about life and choices. if you read again, the argument was mostly focused on the fact that we all have something that drives us, motivates us. we are all bind by shackles. Like they say, even scums have their reasons. if you read ahead, you'll find out that the Main character isn't really a man of understanding. he is more like a follower than a leader. He followed Danish, after getting this speech he became what his father had told him. He believes in what he hears. this is not a small story. I am sure you'll see the importance of this argument in future, if you are still with us. thank your for your support, and this is Just a draft and I'm working on it. I thank you for pointing out flaws.

Good pacing and character development. I love this is going, waiting for next chapter ...

Loved it, dude. its a classic one for sure

Just saw the title and read this masterpiece out of nowhere. I really liked the way you hid everything and gave us a lot of action with no boring backstory. Waiting for the next chap,