HADE_Thoppil

bro even though writing (grammar and spelling etc) is acceptable but sudden developments is too much for me. Every chapter something is revealed without sense for example -first MC is introduced as someone with a strong and healthy body. then he became a genius coder i guess, then a genius alchemist, then a martial artist, then a cultivator, then he became heir to the strongest family in the world and his family wants him dead which is where i stopped . Mr Author buddy if had tried to make the plot more believable then this would have more potential (according to me) anyway good luck 🍀 to Author and other readers

i really tried reading it but it is too much for me. I just couldn't keep up with the writer's spontaneous plot🥲 . it's a test for reading without using brain🧠. Brain drain at its peak. This is my view after reading around 20 chapters and I am giving up after it. maybe someone will like it so Good luck 🍀 to other readers

they have been looking for him for just five years while MC was an orphan his whole life 😂

What is the use of high cultivation if u can't even cure poison used in test trials for newbie evil cultivators

What is the use of high cultivation if u can't even cure poison used in test trials for newbie evil cultivators

if the evil cultivators can grow crocodiles with poison they must have its antidote too.

making something up just like that😂

so she is dumb too😂

😂now crocodile 🐊 are poisonous poor crocodile is a victim of the writers spontaneous mood swings 😂

i don't understand, in the beginning MC was someone who practiced some martial arts , He became a genius alchemist , now he can do things cultivators do. i feel like MC is literally growing every chapter 😂 Feels like the writer is molding MC according to the situation writer to readers::