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    Respondeu a Kaydo_XD

    I have already addressed that i think...

    From reading some comments you would imagine I took away these people favorite toys.
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    Respondeu a Leylin_Farlier99

    To tell you the truth i wrote 2 whole chapters after he Got to Heaven's arena where he did exactly that, put a vow to have a longer reset. Then I though...Who in his sane mind would do that?

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    Respondeu a Helel

    Exactly. That's why you should drop the fanfiction.

    Using abilities as a payment is also something that could return.
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    Respondeu a Kaydo_XD

    I've already tried that by lenghtening the time of the tasks. What is the difference at that point?

    MC hatsu needed to be balanced. The 1 week time frame was a big error on my behalf. It's too short, I can't do time skips and I naturally have to give weaker powers as well.
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  • Old_Fart_3269
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    Respondeu a TanveerBilling2002

    It means that i can't skip by more than 1 week at a time. Some events happen in the span of months, should i simply say 'MC got this 16 new items in the last 4 months'. As you can imagine, i cannot do that without losing the feeling that the draws are really random. That's way i had to adjust that aspect

    MC hatsu needed to be balanced. The 1 week time frame was a big error on my behalf. It's too short, I can't do time skips and I naturally have to give weaker powers as well.
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    Respondeu a cuttlefish146

    it simply means that he cannot touch anything he wasn't already touching when he went intangible

    -The user couldn't physically interact with anything he wasn't in contact with prior to the intangibility's skill activation.
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  • Old_Fart_3269
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    Respondeu a Kaydo_XD

    I wouldn't call that subservient

    From reading some comments you would imagine I took away these people favorite toys.
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  • Old_Fart_3269
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    Respondeu a Oussema_Saddoud

    Thank you my friend!

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    Respondeu a Nobelsky

    That was a nice idea!

    "I choose number 1!"
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    Comentou
    [Obito Uchiha's right eye Kamui (Nen edition)
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    Respondeu a crouchingTiger

    Bankais are too strong. the weaker ones are not to my liking to be honest... I was thinking of shinji shikai... but at the end i chose this ability

    "I choose number 1!"
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  • Old_Fart_3269
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    Respondeu a NiceReviewer

    Thank you! It helps me improve

    -Stole from a famous thieve without being discovered.
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    Respondeu a NiceReviewer

    yeah, i don't have a lot of time to edit the chapter... I miss things here and there

    -Stole from a famous thieve without being discovered.
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    Comentou

    This monster has hundreds of years of experience. I would choose this if I were the Mc...

    [Yamamoto Genryusai's mastery of martial arts.
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    Comentou
    [Quincy medallion.
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    Always loved this ability.

    [Moe Shishigawara' Fullbring: Jackpot Knuckle (Nen version)
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    I couldn't possibly use the real Guldo. I opted for him!

    Guldo was a short and fat man with a bald head full of horns and spikes.
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    A little feral grin bloomed on Roberta's sickly face.
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    Comentou
    Roberta was a tall and slender woman, with black hair combed in 2 braids and a fringe. Thick round glasses covered most of her face.
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  • Old_Fart_3269
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    Respondeu a Kyrus

    I'm not an expert, I've never read the comics. So it's not like I wanted to nerf the ability.

    I have to also to remind myself that Spider-sense doesn't work against 'In'. That is a real bummer.
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