Promezus
A writer who shall bring life to his imagination
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Thank you, Thank you...................... nth times... for the positive feedback, honestly.. I was confused about the direction of story but if one reader think it in a same way which I am thinking then it is worth to go in same direction..... I will continue this and write more.. My vision is different for female lead character and her story rather than same old same old romance thingy... a female should be equal footing with male story.. so thank you so much for your feedback and now I know I can continue this with my vision... Thank you so much... for your first ever positive review on my female lead novel.
Blood Magic
but he before could, he reincarnated to another world, sad 😢
Thank you (:
May be you are talking about Styx River ?
correct.. story must continue. even if they were high level NPC let's say 10000 level still, I will find some way to continue story, if not, tata bye bye story end at chapter 1.
my point was to add the betrayal, that even you know someone since childhood and grew up together, in face of greed, power anyone can turn against you and can betrayed you... if she could have told her for keeper for money there she would only get the money but here money, fame, power, everything
ohh understand your point now... XD It's about the way its done..
In perspective to influence family everyone, human, animal, monster whatever for them everyone are some random side character, but you are a reader in your prespective he became the main character.
I got your point, but he is a MC, every story whether it's novel, manga, manhwa, manhua, movie, web series whatever revole around one character called as Main character.There always a trigger point, a breaking point where one character journey start to explore the world and become powerful. She can get any eye from any random people then that random one become the MC or if not MC, then may be a friend of MC ? sister of MC ? Wife of MC ? mother of MC ? father of MC.if not ? then it would be totally random story of someone without any goal and destination, nothing at all..
as you already know, mc was in different realm and time flows differently as well know.. No one knows how much time our mc spent in that realm...