AnikaSilverheart

I love the story. it just needs to work on emotional state of the characters between the FL and ML more. but it is very good and keep up the good work Author and never give up

no, I am talking about every one of the chapters that has a chapter in the title

It is very good story but it got confusing with the chapters in the titles even reading the story i understand why it is there but if you want to spilt the story like that i have to say to add to the story chapter not put the chapters together. Keep up the good work Author and never give up

I felt like i was watching a good movie. knowing that this is a novel. I love the story so much that I felt empathy for Connie that he had to pickpocket since he was in school. Keep up the good work Author and never give up.

It is funny how Ling gotten the chinks drunk lol

I love the story it takes you into the story like you are one with the character. Plus, I have to quote one of the paragraphs because it hits home very well. "If I'm thinking this much over their pointless actions then honestly, it seems to be more stupid and crazy." Keep up the good work author and never give up.

https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLcbLlduBGfZoG66je5FskgFYy4tx24Qw&si=9h1r10gH7EuUzZ2p

I usually don't read stories like this but it was very interesting. with someone with PTSD should not read something like this because it can trigger but I still like it. So don't give up Author

It is an interesting story, it has a hook that just drags you into the story like you one with it. Keep up the good work Author and never give up no matter what someone tells you something bad.

you are welcome 😊