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Timothy_Odhiambo

Timothy_Odhiambo

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2023-07-14 UnidoKenya
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Respondeu a NIHILA

    I am glad you liked my work, please do feel free to share my work.[img=exp]

    STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
    Urbano · Timothy_Odhiambo
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Respondeu a Marconegrao7

    thanks for the review, please feel free to share my work.

    STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
    Urbano · Timothy_Odhiambo
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Postado

    This is a great story that explores the theme of love and obsession like no other, but from the beginning as it cooks slowly perhaps for the author's plan to develop his characters all round

    STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
    Urbano · Timothy_Odhiambo
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Comentou

    great story, I have enjoyed it.

    Ch 1 Dreams Of A Magus' Life
    Return of the Strongest Forbidden Magus
    Fantasia · Cloud_Daoist
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Comentou

    nice opening

    Ch 1 Dreams Of A Magus' Life
    Return of the Strongest Forbidden Magus
    Fantasia · Cloud_Daoist
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Comentou

    great continuation. keep it up.

    Ch 1 FlashBack
    Predators Reign
    Fantasia · NamanKumar
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo8mth
    Comentou

    This no, don't tell just show what is happening.

    "ZZZzzz...Huh? Oh, yeah. What happened next?" Soul jerked awake suddenly.
    Predators Reign
    Fantasia · NamanKumar
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo9mth
    Comentou

    the start is great, I envy your talent.

    Ch 1 Nexus of Ascendance
    Chimerical World System
    Fantasia · Han_Sirang
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo9mth
    Comentou

    I really like the opening.

    In a small village, life bustled with the energy of both people and animals. The autumn weather had brought in clouds that obscured the sun, and a recent rain had left the village streets muddy and treacherous.
    Vampire Headsman
    Fantasia · NIHILA
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo9mth
    Comentou

    Just like the way the story opens, [img=coins]let me find the mc first

    Ch 1 An Interesting Turn Of Events
    War On Man
    Fantasia · LanumKing
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  • Timothy_Odhiambo
    Timothy_Odhiambo10mth
    Respondeu a whispers_timmy

    will address that, thank you.

    Ch 1 The Ride.
    STORM OVER A PARADISE:THE DARK LOOM
    Urbano · Timothy_Odhiambo
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