Thank you. More chapters will come soon enough.

This was quite well made and I like it. The beginning took me by storm when it came to character design. Author knows characters well and have a big vocabulary for them, so this is quite unique with the style. There weren't much Grammar issues to speak up except a few mispelled words, but it didn't take anything away from the experience. The Action was pretty cool too. This is a Great story hands down.

Well this is one psychotic story i'll tell you that. Each of the characters in this family are defined with their own personality and I like how the author brings out their emotions and life despite the whole crazy atmosphere behind their lives. The Sttyle of writing is solid . I didn't see many Grammar mistakes. The world builds greatly and it is a solid yet Wacky story.

Thank you very much.

This story starts off with the birth of a god. It's pretty cool. I like the gods we get introduced to. Very interesting. It is an entertaining and has it's moments of great character design with story development. Good work,

This started off pretty dark and I kind of feel this situation as it goes deep . This story really hit me. I don't get to say that for many of them but this is what a dark beginning looks like. You nailed the situations, You had great , no, Overwhelmingly good characters, and maintained the story quality with a unique style. This drew me in. I was locked on the story. There are a few grammatical errors but they are like maybe one or two. Not nothing big to talk about. This is a story that knows what it is about. Now, there is one thing I do have to talk about, and that is the Synopis. It might just be me but when I read it, I was confused. I opened Novel and, well, it took me a good minute to understand. I'm not taking a point away from that though. Your Craft was good.

Fantastic writing and Great characters. I really like the whole take on Aliens and Ai in this story. It brings a life to this Mc Kai who also has a system. The action scenes were splended and I progression was well paced. This was very interesting. This world gets more interesting the more you read it. (I may just be a sucker for non-human stuffs, but I cannot deny it was a good read).

What you got here is a good story. the characters are amazing, the story is also well done and the style of writing was easy to flow through. The world building, I would say it somewhat builds progressively but there are detailed descriptions. And the Action kept me engaged to the story. Although this is good, in the beginning there is a few running on sentences. You would want to add a full stop to not have those sentences go on like that. This is the only problem iv'e noticed as everything else seemed on point. The Author does improve in later chapters though so I would still give it to them. I'll say this was still a worthwhile read.

Well uh.... that was quite the strange adventure, but I like strange! Great job there. I mean when I saw the title of this I was like 'There's no way they can pull this off...' Suprise! They managed to do it and somehow , someway get you into it. Humor , entertainment, well-written characters? all there. Of course, some things are like 'wtf' but beyond that, it's actually a whole adventure. Good on you. I am giving it to you.

What the chicken mc nuggets is this?

I got to say this story was deep. When I first read the start of it I was kind of thinking it would go in a slower direction but I was impressed by the Author. They made a deeply relatable scenario like I feel what the character goes through in the chapters I read.

I liked everything about this world . The system there is pretty interesting and fun. It provides a unique blend on things. The characters were pretty good though , there are a few grammatical errors. They aren't that heavy but some common words. Also the use of terms like cut were done in overuse. It is funny but also . I believe you don't have to do it so long. That's just my opinion. Overall I found this world interesting and so should readers. This is full of cool action.

I have to say I didn't expect this to be as good as it was. I liked the characters and the action scenes they were pretty nice. The concept of what was written was pretty unique and 'hot' (lol). But I liked the relationship that built up with the characters the most. It sorta reminds me of something I can't put my finger on but either way, pretty solid and hooking. Before I knew it I was reading more and more. The only problem I had was really the transitions. sometimes they happen a bit 'too' fast. That sometimes threw me off. I know it is mentioned where they are going but it would be nice to see their arrival sometimes. That's the only thing from me, everything else hit's right. Good writing.

This is a Good story for what I have read. The story does move along at a slow pace which is not necessarily bad. The characters were introduced in a way that you would be able to get a picture of who they were and they had some good dynamics. This is the strong point. But I do need to address some of the Grammar as there is some I have to note. First of all, when you are writing for the dialogue you should stick to a tense for the characters. It can get confusing if you say ' Here is what happened, I went to the front and then I would slap them'(Just an example). It does not sound right so I do believe that this is an area which needs improvement as it can be seen many times. There are others that could be stylized better to incorporate a better Dialogue narrative as with some improvements, the dialogue could be amazing. Overall though, the Story dominates as it holds up the interest in the chapters and if you are willing to look past the mistakes you still have a story which can draw you in with well -rounded characters and nice world.

Great story. I like the idea the way it was put down with the time ability which made things interesting from the start. There are a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapters which can be noticed for a few words but it is not very frequent. While they don't take away from the story it is something that could be fixed by the Author with a quick review over their chapter. I was able to follow the plot well despite the many focuses on the system stuff and enjoyed it.

Now you see, I may be a little bias because this is some power I wanted myself but I should say that the writing is applied well in gaining this awakening of their power. It is good through and through . It does stake a few chapters to get off the ground and get into exploring the ability but it is fine when the story behind it keeps it flowing. It is something I intend to keep on reading and others should join me. Because it's cloning. Did I say how much I like the concept of clones? I know there is one famous cloning thing but now this looks like it could be the next. Interesting.