yooo i enjoyed this it's awesome

yeah it's is pretty good i feel like the only nitpick I Have with it is some of the dialogue but other I can just ignore and countie reading like i do with some fanfic but good work

i love I've just binged read all it so far and it's amazing well done ✅

right cool i know the writing bad cause i did say i was fairly new to writing stuff

honestly iIguees I ethier ingnored it or forget about it

looking forward to reading this I've read most of Ur other ones and I Know Thier gonna be a good read in my spare time

Orange Star high Gohan went Thier when he turned 17 (he is physically 18 due to training in Hyperbolic Time Chamber, and so placed with others technically born a year before, but he is their age

second chapter done if u want to check it out

second chap out if u want to check it out

soo good bro

loving it so far can't wait for the next chapter probably gonna wait till a few more are out and binge read them

looks good so far

it looks excellent so far it's gonna since I haven't seen any green lantern type fanfics before