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crazy? I was crazy once. They locked me in a room, a rubber room, a rubber room with rats. and rats make me crazy.
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I am curious if before the invasion of earth are you gonna have Asher spill the deets of his past life or will Rowena find out? That will be pivotal in the success of the relationship, it will either make or break it and in turn help or destroy the kingdom. so my initial question was do you have it planned or planned based on # of chapter like chapter 800 or so or a little after? unless it will give too much away then I can wait
I like when a story emphasizes a creature only to make it manageable and not imaginable, what makes scary creatures scary or terrifying is it's presence, size, and ability to kill/strike fear. each one can be combined
I was just going off of serpent as a snake can be described as a serpent but I see there could be different types of serpents.
could've used a sound to describe, (depending on how big it is) like the sound of a rope being waved around back and forth, or the sound of new fresh leather being continuously stretched. I feel like that could have given more to the size of the snake and in doing that I still a fear or terror of how big a snake has to be for the sound of it moving it's tounge/body has to be to make those sounds audible.
Would have thought he would be higher level after Brooke