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BeastBear

BeastBear

Lv2
2023-05-09 UnidoPakistan
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear6d
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    Hello, The authors here, And yes, I am giving my own novel a review with a five-star rating, and that's because no one does that, no comment, no review, and I have crossed 9.5k views already. Anyway, I just wanted to say that if you read the first few chapters and are planning to drop it because the story is slow or there is no battle, then please don't. Just give it some time, and you will realize that there are a lot of battles, and the story is also fast-paced, and I mean really fast-paced. Also, if you see anyplace I can improve on, please don't hesitate to comment, as I need your support to become better, thank you for reading this. Also, you can ask any question here

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • BeastBear
    BeastBear17d
    Comentou
     The Resurrection of Xinli
    The Mad Man Awakens The Forbidden Eyes
    Fantasia · Loneee
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear19d
    Comentou

    Just came back to leave my mark

    Chapter 1 - Life on Earth
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear20d
    Comentou

    does he want to keep his power hidden or is he just plain stupid to not tell anyone?

    "Thank you, Susan," Leo said, genuinely grateful for her advice. He bid her farewell and promised to be earlier the next day.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear21d
    Comentou

    A pair of crossed swords*

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    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear23d
    Respondeu a John_nut

    and that to on web novel? and if that wasn't enough you used it while reading a chinese novel?

    "Get up, get up, have something to eat first." Cui Heng raised his hand lightly, and a wave of invisible Dharmic powers surged out, directly dragging Hong Fugui to stand up.
    Realizing This Is A Wuxia World After Cultivating For 300 Years
    Oriental · Sole Cloud Flying Cave
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear23d
    Respondeu a tedmosby2016

    this one

    The door was pushed open and a youth wearing a snow-white robe walked into the room. He was handsome and had an elegant temperament, as if he was a Deity that had descended from the heavens.
    Realizing This Is A Wuxia World After Cultivating For 300 Years
    Oriental · Sole Cloud Flying Cave
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear23d
    Comentou

    New Chapter when?

    Leo's eyes widened in amazement. "That's just one rank below S!" he exclaimed.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear23d
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    he gets embarrassed if seen without a shirt and now that someone directly talk about him having children so balantly he did not even blushed and just smile?

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    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Respondeu a BeastBear

    Chapter 16: The novel so far is good. There is some weird logic here and there, and some of the paragraphs are too long for the readers comfort, but considering this is the author's first novel, it could be considered a job well done.

    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Comentou

    paragraph is too long for mobile readers!

    Fresh air breezed past them as the warm light of the sun beamed down, casting a golden glow on the landscape. Leo glanced back towards the farm, a smile forming as he reminisced about his time there. He recalled the first time he saw the monster and adventurers, how people used their powers to facilitate work on the farm, and the moments he went unconscious due to the heat of the sun. There were days when Ranna chased down workers who weren't doing anything. Despite their lack of interaction, the farm workers always helped each other when needed, especially with the elderly.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Comentou

    why did he not tell the truth to amanda while telling everything to ranna?

    Leo watched her, feeling a profound sense of accomplishment and relief. The future that once seemed uncertain and filled with obstacles now looked bright and full of promise. He knew that moving to the capital was just the beginning of their new adventure together.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Comentou

    Is he gay to be so embarrassed??

    He quickly pulled on a shirt, his face still burning with embarrassment. Ranna couldn't contain her laughter, clutching her stomach as she watched him.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Comentou

    cringe*

    Having confirmed his agility and stamina, Leo decided it was time to test. "Strength!" he shouted, his voice echoing through the cavern. He jumped and thrust forward, the movement so swift that the fog trailed behind him in a delayed reaction. In the blink of an eye, he was face to face with the Orc Lord, his body fluid and precise.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear24d
    Comentou

    i hope this doesn't become a novel where mc is unaware of his power

    Leo's smile widened as he watched the monster approach with all its might. The exhilaration of the previous hit still coursed through his veins. "I didn't feel any pain!" he thought, elated. This meant his power far exceeded that of a level 50 monster. He stood from the rubble with a menacing grin, feeling the thrill of battle in every fiber of his being.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear25d
    Postado

    chapter 10 the story is good till now there has not been any brain dead cliché event and the humor is also good will keep reading and update the review based on quality

    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear25d
    Comentou
    She was stunning, with long, flowing white hair that shimmered like moonlight cascading down her back. Her skin was flawless alabaster, smooth and glowing with an otherworldly radiance. She wore a simple camisole, an old-fashioned garment that clung to her form, its loose side revealing a significant portion of her left breast. Her figure was voluptuous yet graceful, with curves that seemed to be sculpted by the gods themselves.
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear25d
    Comentou
    Chapter 2 - Reincarnation
    VIP System
    Fantasia · ArmedLeos
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  • BeastBear
    BeastBear25d
    Respondeu a Ash_Reader
    Este livro foi excluído.
  • BeastBear
    BeastBear26d
    Comentou

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Hold On...
    Supreme Harem God System
    Fantasia · SleepDeprivedSloth
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