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Mxna_9mthRespondeu a StarParagonLol, In the original draft that did happen, but I ignored that rule as it won't make sense since nobody can actually join the game anymore after that and it'll be a good plot device in the future.
『ADAM------』- Mxna_9mthComentou
I've been indecisive with how his name should be spelt... but I've decided that it's with a "Z" now and not an "S" so ignore the mistake if you encounter it in future...
"Perfect, im going to hide anyway, I'm the weakest in the group for a reason." Vari said as he halted, turned around and started walking away and Kaizen followed him. - Mxna_10mthRespondeu a pockyslee
The tiers are for the Demons. I will explain that eventually. I just didn't want the info dump in the first ten chapters to be outrageous.Also, I'll definitely flesh out the story, it's still at the 11th chapter anyway.Also, I understand this trope might be generic, but I promise to make it worthwhile 🦇THANKS FOR READING
Ch 10 Scenario 0.1 (4): Valeria - Mxna_10mthRespondeu a ENDERMYSTERYGOD
If anyone perfectly predicted what I intended to do in the end with a particular relationship in my story, then I'd give up trying to write.But I promise it's not anything like that. Thanks for reading. frequent Updates soon 🦇
Ch 11 Scenario 0.1 (5): Moving Forward - Mxna_10mthRespondeu a Mxna_
- Mxna_10mthRespondeu a Blazzing18
Tbf, my synopsis needs work, I'll get on that immediately.Also, at this stage, romance isn't the first thing in anyone's mind, neither are a lot of people thinking about getting as many girls as possible (At least Our MC doesn't think that). Essentially, from now to about, 20-35 chapters in, the MC has but a few things on his mind, and none of them involve one or multiple romantic/sexual companions.Oh and also, please stick around, I'll try to make it worthwhile.
- Mxna_10mthRespondeu a Romance_guy
- Mxna_11mthRespondeu a SleepySmile
Lol, it's one of my biggest inspirations anyway, but that was a coincidence lol.I do have another book that does have more obvious inspiratory homage and stuff...
Overly-Immersive Virtual Reality {OVR} of otherwise unattainable proportions became a possibility now within reach. - Mxna_11mthComentou
Similar.Translation: Foolish. Stupid Guy, Stupid Guy, Stupid Guy.
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Oh yeah and this is Spanish.Translation: "Foolish. Stupid, Stupid, Stupid. You Have Killed Us, Stupid!"if you think I should add the translation in the chapter itself next time, just like this and I will
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Sword Bloke ✨✨
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Near-death, moribund, End-of-life...those were the best I could think of, But dying just fit better... I would've used Moribund, but it sounds out of place lol
In fact, its ratings increased drastically and more than ninety percent of the population were playing this game. Young, old. Living and dying. - Mxna_11mthRespondeu a UrekSenpa1
Not dead lol...You can understand it as people who are on their deathbed, who choose to play this game to feel like they aren't on their deathbed...hence dying
In fact, its ratings increased drastically and more than ninety percent of the population were playing this game. Young, old. Living and dying. - Mxna_11mthRespondeu a Heavens_Ending
You're right about that tho, lol
"Sorry about the Saitama wannabe's outburst, no hard feelings alright?" Moon walked towards Adam, he was a rather short, dark skinned and dark-haired male, he had really young-looking face despite his friends Vari and Kaiser seeming significantly older. - Mxna_11mthRespondeu a UrekSenpa1
That*thanks for noticing anyway.
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Just a lovely light-hearted warning... The system is so nice 🤧💕
Este número foi suprimido. - Mxna_1yrRespondeu a Rengoz
You're welcome 😁 thank you for the feedback, it means a lot to me really
Este livro foi excluído. - Mxna_1yrRespondeu a Mxna_
oh yeah, ask any questions you may have under this review
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