LimitlessEvil
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yes, yes i am. i write thousands of words a day. every chapter is a combination of thousands of words interchanged, rough drafts etc. i’m not perfect bro i cant make one mistake without getting 💩for it? Well sorry that I made a mistake, I apologiz e
I mean, not really. I have work after school most days so it’s like, I can push out chaps at the price of stressing myself even further. But I do apologize to you all as my readers. But I have a lot on my load, I’l try to do better but i’m only human.
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are you enjoying the story so far? any complaints? anything you feel as though I need to improve on? all criticism is welcomed.
This is HxH world Post-partum Nen users don’ rot that fast
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But, he doesn't have ABSOLUTE muscle control. It's enhanced allowing him to do things otherwise impossibly by regular people such as constrict blood flow with his insane muscle control. My goal isn't to make him braindead OP quickly, I want to have him GROW not uhoh I just discovered how to manipulate REALITY! now im the strongest: story end.
it’s too low leveled of a gene to be able to detach the muscles, he has muscle control not fully body control, he would have to retach nerve endings etc. i can go deeper but this will have to much human biology for a comment
Author here, I want to say. This will not be receiving a shameless 5 star review from me, It's not up to my standards. Although, I do try to deliver the best quality possible and make sure my grammar is always up to par. The dialogue, story telling and world building are sitting at a solid 3.8 for me. That's my personal opinion, I convey characteristics through their words instead of their actions a tad bit too much and I'm slowly but surely fixing this habit. I hope you all can stay with me on my journey to finishing this story and see the improvements as an author I go through. Happy reading!