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I really like this story, it has so many things that i like and this has a focus on kingdom building which is my favorite genre. The only problem I have with this story is the extremely simple charecter design, the charecters need more to them, they feel to dlfictional and 2D The mughal king charecter design is a little better and so was the father of kavya, but the rest of the charecters seem bland. The action in the story and the strategic mind of the MC adds a nice touch of action in the story, overall a really good story. Keep it up!
Shameless review from author but for compensation, here's a little spoiler riddle! The bigger you are the harder you fall. Anyways 5 stars for the updating stability *cough* Also please leave reviews so that more people read this If you guys have any ideas, feel free to post them in the comments or reviews, i'll definitely read a few from now and then.
Foreshadowing for the future?