What do you guys think about my story so far? What do you want to see and think I can approve on.

Author Review here. I think I've done a pretty good job on everything except world background. I am in high school so don't expect much. My story is rather unique and is something I enjoy writing. Especially describing her fights.

I am shocked by how many typos there are.

He may be using her for his own benefit but eventually he will repay her.

I like his character actually. Seems like we are opposites. That makes us rivals.

After reading through this I realize I kind of skimmed through some things that I should've went in more detail for. Like Sunny gaining some of Sunten's memories. I will try to improve that going forward.

The future chapters won't be this short unless there's a special reason

I don't feel like describing how he looks so here's a picture.