Ash sounds like a decent man, but i don't think he would've spared the life of Su if he ever defeated him XD The fight was well described and also i like the fact that the emotions do play an important role in the fight, as we can see that frusturation did make Ash loses his composure thus exposing his weak spots which led to his loss. I am now excited to see how Rokie and Herah will fight. And on top of all, i am more excited to see how you will describe it to make it an immersive read.

On the other hand, after we returned to see Su's POV, it's like the older brother who wants to make his younger brother proud of him, it's really heartwarming how these two could form some sort of potential brotherhood.

it is an interesting take to see Mervan's POV, It sounds that he idolize (in a good sense) Su one way or another. His POV sounds like a younger brother fascinated by the strength and maturity of his older brother. I like that

TRAINING ARC PART 2 : PREPARATION FOR THE TOURNAMENT

INVESTIGATOR SU on the mission to find clues about the Hood Dudes (Surely they are otakus) .

OH HO HO HO KALA, a new mysterious character emerges. I am sensing a little backstory of Eldran, it might not be full, but it will give depth to his character

FOOTWORK : ZEPHYR STEPS

That's how i imagined Su chasing the kid

Su is really digging his grave by saying that Eldran has gone crazy XD NICE CHAPTER THAT sets up a new place. I can see that the lore will expand further and also the world building is getting revealed one step at a time, I AM REALLY EXCITED

Eldran was like : LEG DAY TIME LIL SU

TRAINING ARC PART 2 : THE BASICS , LESGOOOO

WAIFU DETECTED, THOUGHTS REJECTED, that's what i imagined what Su repeated to himself to focus on the training ARC

Action packed chapter, The Leyths reminded me of the ghouls from pre-islamic arabian mythologies.

woooooohooooooo, nothing better than a power system that has 3 sub-power systems (or more)! I did love the Sutra, Mana and Aura thing. It like the Sutra being the manifestation of the physical power, the Mana is more of a mental thingy, and last but not least, the Aura is spiritual prowess.

I didnt rate the character design because there are no images, but i already imagined how Su, the old man, the corrupted Lord and those wicked soldiers look like. Same goes for the Oriazerks and the Wyverns.

2 new chapters ??? WE EATING GOOD

ALREADY EXCITED TO READ THIS

As someone who did read the first versions, the way of writing improved a lot and captivates the attention of the readers. ALSO I HATE THE BASTARD GARY

THE AUTHOR IS COOKING

An underrated novel that I would like to see adaptated into videogames (Square Enix would do it justice), manga and anime. It gives me vibes of the darkness of Zelda Twilight Princess and the depth of Nier Replicant. Oh and also a little bit of Re:Zero