TheNobleRain
“The sun provides their manna as the wind leads them to their destiny— clouds are my favourite animals.”
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TheNobleRain3mthRespondeu a Murdda223The power system and battle? As I've written towards the last paragraphs of this chapter, people above level 80 won't be allowed to fight on Earth because of how strong they are. So imagine how much more power the level 90s have.
•SS-rank = level 90- 99- TheNobleRain3mthRespondeu a Murdda223
The MC's goal is to find the Shards of the UNIVERSE . Maybe he'll have that answer ready for you. ;)
•SS-rank = level 90- 99 - TheNobleRain3mthRespondeu a Murdda223
As long as there are people known to be below level 1, there are definitely going to be others above level 99. But of course the rest of the world wouldn't know that. ;) [PS. I've even introduced a few people above level 99. But you'll never guess them...]
•SS-rank = level 90- 99 - TheNobleRain3mthComentou
Was this system (aka the information you wrote) inspired by something else? Because I find that things like these are hard to make up. It's quite compelling. PS. I guess reading this chapter first is considered a spoiler?(ノಥ,_｣ಥ)ノ彡┻━┻
Ch -1 {NOTICE} SYSTEM STATUS [As of Ch6] - TheNobleRain4mthRespondeu a ILovemyself_84
- TheNobleRain4mthRespondeu a ILovemyself_84
- TheNobleRain4mthRespondeu a Adeniran_Charles
- TheNobleRain4mthRespondeu a Pj77
Me replying here cuz reviews get deleted if I edit the paragraphs. 😭 (no wonder authors don't change misspellings)I asked you a question before, and would like to thank you for your feedback. I'll take it to mind and hopefully I'll improve.
To the panic ladened citizens, this man looked no more than an unimportant black dot in the sky. However, like now, this 'dot' compared to the massive population of Earth, was the only one who could wrought unmatched dread amongst all. - TheNobleRain4mthRespondeu a Pj77
No trouble intended but, until what part does the novel get tiring? I realized that the MC isn't being of too much focus with the black ranks stealing the spotlight. Is that a problem?
Este número foi suprimido. - TheNobleRain5mthRespondeu a Slrrrp
lol XD
Bai Qi stroked his chin, pointing at a big tree in the yard, and said, "Alpha, use Skeletal Hardening and attack that tree." - TheNobleRain5mthPostado
I had thought this book was perfect till I wore the shoes of a reader and started reading it myself recently. And although few, it still has misspelt words in some parts and in some others, words that didn't really seem necessary. The early chapters are bulky, having 2.3k words in just one chapter, so this often led me to feeling like I'm not making progress in scrutinizing it because of the time I spend reading it.But then again, for a first book with a lot of thinking behind it, each chapter is an exciting experience; the abilities of the characters are really unusual and unique; and the MC is still building up into a peculiar one, being a soul-sucking vampire who likes scaring people as a hobby and having detachable body parts lol.I acknowledge the flaws but... I'm still giving my book 5 dang stars. I know how much I worked on it, so I'm giving myself praise. Let's all deal with it... And read it, please. (~‾▿‾)~
- TheNobleRain5mthRespondeu a Emoji_9Ch 12 The Heir's Return II
- TheNobleRain5mthRespondeu a AshburnDz
Lol. I'm prolly one in a million people who'll get this joke.
"Thank heavens," Sonny breathed a sigh of relief. "It seems you do remember your sister, Safa." - TheNobleRain6mthRespondeu a Pj77
Lol. Funny chapter though.
Este número foi suprimido. - TheNobleRain6mthRespondeu a Pj77
Webnovel doesn't take me to the exact paragraphs you highlight, so it is kind of hard going back through the chapters and looking for that specific misspelled word. Regardless, I've covered those ones you've suggested. So thanks.
Este número foi suprimido. - TheNobleRain7mthComentouCh 12 The Heir's Return II