Hello dear readers!I can't wait to share this story with you guys[img=recommend] Hopefully you will enjoy and I am thankful for all your comments and reviewes! Let me know your thoughts and share your ideas[img=update]Your dearest,Dazelda
I like the overall story a lot and the chara ters:) the only thing that could be a little improved would be the language as the sentences and conversations are sometimes a little too simple
oh god this is also a very tragic love story! I really didn't expect it but I love that about it because it is not a straightforward love and often in real life it actually isn't...
not everyone has the mental strength to stay on the right path and sometimes one has to make bad mistakes to understand what is right and good... I really like that there is such a character in this story!
"I'll love her selflessly, cherish her endlessly and protect her fearlessly." He said and then turned to Heaven. He looked her in the eyes. "I will share her happiness and her pain."