nice all these new chapter[img=strong]

for the plot and beginnen it looks very good i dont realy have a compliane i was a bit lost in the beginnen, but i see you also changed and updated those part, and its better to read no. mostly im working on games so i love to relax and reqd novels so i will keep coming back for this one. nice job [img=update][img=gift]

chapters looking good, and nice that you uploading daily cant wait for the new chapter. [img=update]

its a nice beginning of the story!

Thanks for the feedback ill take a look into this when character building :D and the gap ill check this too Chapter one is based on a prologue and chapter 2 is like the real start of the story but im gonna take a look on this thanks for the awesome feedback

Hi all just a shamfull and random review from me, I hope you all are liking my story, if you have feedback or just have question i would be happy to hear them. So enjoy the story, and a kind regards to all of you out there :D