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The story feel too rushed ,and the whole four timelines thingy is a bit confusing .the idea of chat group is good but the members being same guy from same world though different timelines make it kinda awkward .The idea of a 6 years old reincarnator from a modern world been able to hide from experienced soul masters without training is also sus .
Great Job
same here
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