Dzazmie_D_Fountain
I am the fountain; I never run dry... I am the water; I never drown... Bibliophile 📖 Lectiophile ... Writing is my addiction...
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One word: Mind-blowing! From the synopsis, to the first chapter, to the well pictured difference between the rich and the poor, I am impressed. This is one book I'm going to be following through! Cos, trust me, it is a good read! Job well done!
why not go for, "My boss's handsome some, who might be earning a hundred times more than I do?'
the second part should really not be here... it would be better if it was a paragraph on its own, and then a 'note:' before it
Boy? Man sounds more... like it 🤭
The book is good! Honestly, it is! You have a knack for descriptions and all. Also, you put the characters where they should be at the right time. Also, your world building skills are topnotch. But, I think you can do better when it comes to dialogues and description. For instance, describing a character from another's point of view. As for the dialogue, just lessen the dialogue tags and use more action words. Overall, I like the book! From the first chapter, to the fourth, where I stopped (for now!). Kudos, Author!
🥺I'm so sorry!
Hey guys, Author here!I do hope that by the end of this chapter, you've dropped your comments and reviews.you have, right?thank you! 💕 and if you haven't already please 🙏🥺 do.
...Just an reminder that when you see this, do well to give my book a read and don't forget to tell me what you think.Xìèxìe 😊
thank you 😊... will sort it out now