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Lo_Ner_4033

Lo_Ner_4033

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2022-06-19 UnidoNigeria
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Escrita

1h

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20

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Emblemas

5

Momentos

13
  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Respondeu a NB00000

    It's magic. 😉😉😉😏😏😂

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    Peter Grimm: tales from another world
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Respondeu a NB00000

    they were pretty lol😂😂

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    Peter Grimm: tales from another world
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Postado

    Top quality contents. I like the descriptiveness of the book. It just helps my imagination as I read through. I wasn't quite expecting her to get to the palace so quick though but let's see what the fates have in store for her.

    NTa
    Fantasia · NB00000
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Comentou

    Short chapter but quality contents. That was still pretty selfish of Mary to be happy when Joanna quit school. But hey, let's see where this takes us😉😉

    Ch 2 Kidnapped
    NTa
    Fantasia · NB00000
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Comentou

    I love how well detailed it is something I struggle to do. The story line seems interesting and those flashes she gets about the Prince just keeps me hooked 😩😩😩👍👍👍❤️

    Ch 1 It Began With A Dream
    NTa
    Fantasia · NB00000
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Respondeu a Flower_Something

    thanks. ❤️❤️❤️

    Peter Grimm: tales from another world
    Fantasia · Lo_Ner_4033
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Respondeu a aartishankar_21

    thanksssssss

    Peter Grimm: tales from another world
    Fantasia · Lo_Ner_4033
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Postado

    it's a nice read. The characters are very relatable and the story line is catchy. You can still work on your grammatical errors because there are a few. But overall it's a really good read.

    Rsl
    Urbano · aartishankar_21
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Comentou

    The story is really good. Nice plot but there's still room for improvement

    Ch 1 Part 1
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    Urbano · aartishankar_21
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Comentou

    The story is really good. Nice plot but there's still room for improvement

    Ch 1 Part 1
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    Urbano · aartishankar_21
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Comentou

    The story is really good. Nice plot but there's still room for improvement

    Ch 1 Part 1
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    Urbano · aartishankar_21
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Respondeu a An_Average_Author

    thanks, I'll try my best to work on my errors

    Peter Grimm: tales from another world
    Fantasia · Lo_Ner_4033
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  • Lo_Ner_4033
    Lo_Ner_40331yr
    Postado

    I'm sorry about the low rating lol. But the thing is the chapter one should use more editing. The dialogues are quite clustered so it's difficult to understand. You eventually improve in the other chapters but it'll be nice if you edit because the chapter one is what normally captures readers. I like the aspect of the book as it's quite different from the norm. A guy dies and reincarnates as an ant is totally brilliant. I will keep on reading to see how you develop this ant characters. cheers❤️.

    Ant Society
    Fantasia · An_Average_Author
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