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It's magic. 😉😉😉😏😏😂
they were pretty lol😂😂
I'm sorry about the low rating lol. But the thing is the chapter one should use more editing. The dialogues are quite clustered so it's difficult to understand. You eventually improve in the other chapters but it'll be nice if you edit because the chapter one is what normally captures readers. I like the aspect of the book as it's quite different from the norm. A guy dies and reincarnates as an ant is totally brilliant. I will keep on reading to see how you develop this ant characters. cheers❤️.