DobyTime
ITS MF DOBYTIME
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Honestlly the novel took me by surprisee. Youur story is very unique for being an isekai. Fight scenes are discriptive from what you’v shown so far. But I just can’t stand themain character. Hopefully you make him have a serious development. I also only noticed a few amount of grammar mistakes. But it did feel abit confusing at times. Especially how he was suddenly back in limbo? You didn’t describe. How he was suddenly back. But overall it seems really good. :)