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The beginning of the novel was great, but after hundreds of chapters the harem got out of control, it's so big that even I forget their names and it doesn't seem like it's going to stop anytime soon.
Could you do a companion chapter stating his women's power rankings? Milia is at what level?
I feel like the harem has gone out of control, the author keeps adding new women without properly fleshing out the old ones, especially the ones that were added in the 1 year long *rgy. As of right now Maya is just a worse Scathach, and the author hasn't made her different enough for me to like her. I would rather the author wait and do a flashback chapter every now or then to Victor spending time with his new wives 1 on 1, (maybe after the *rgy and Samar) before adding new women.