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Alter_Ch

Alter_Ch

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I love reading and writing fantasy novels

2022-05-13 UnidoGlobal
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
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    Just an author supporting his own creation! If you like stories set in a fantasy world where the MC regresses and gets a second chance at life, this story might be right up your alley! The MC isn't an all-powerful being but he is strong in his own right so there's a lot of room for development, moreso for his character as he's by default apathetic and is slowly learning about human emotions! For now, updates will be 3 chapters/week but it's subject to change and Powerstone rankings will increase the amount of chapters uploaded! Feel free to tune in and read!

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    Fantasia · Alter_Ch
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
    Comentou

    Nice, he didn't let his strength get to his head. I'm liking this!

    "I've thought about it. Once I purchase what I want, I would leave to train in the demonic forest" Cross said, with a resolute expression on his face. He knew once news of him defeating Little Orange spread, the others would come find him. For now he wasn't strong enough, so he would train his body hard, with his new strength he believed he would come back to the school stronger than he was.
    Celestial body
    Oriental · Blessedcreation
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
    Respondeu a Blessedcreation

    Thank you!

    NineS
    Fantasia · Alter_Ch
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
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    This is my review of the story so far. 1. Story. It's a nice Eastern Fantasy/Xianxia/Cultivation novel. There are only 3 chapters out right now at the time of this review, but the MC's character is finely meshed out in the first and second chapter. Antagonists are there, and yes, like any other cultivation novel, they're the arrogant young master (bastard) types. (I hope the MC beats the shit out of the first guy later down the line.) 2. The World Background still isn't completely established. Only a small portion of it has been revealed which is the MC's school, but I can see this cultivation novel having a lot of promise, especially in terms of world building! 3. I'm not sure how old the MC is but I assume he's still a teenager considering how he acts from chapter 1 to 3. His power up hasn't been explained in detail and the MC doesn't understand it all too well but at the very least, he's willing to use it and not conceal himself. Hiding one's strength is cool and all, but it makes people underestimate the MC and I'm not that much of a fan of that trope. (I really loved it when the MC showed one of those condescending characters their place in chapter 3). I just hope he doesn't get arrogant from it but overall, the MC's development is pretty good. I look forward to how the MC changes down the lines. 3. Writing quality. The author's grammar and word choices are spot on. The flow of the story isn't interrupted at all which I find a plus since I want to immerse myself in the book and not have to think twice about what I just read. There are a few typos but those can easily be fixed. 4. Overall. I found the story quite entertaining though only 3 chapters have been released. I look forward to more!

    Celestial body
    Oriental · Blessedcreation
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
    Comentou

    Okay, a little show of strength is cool and all. Let's hope it doesn't get to the MC's head!

    Ch 3 Little Orange
    Celestial body
    Oriental · Blessedcreation
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
    Comentou

    I like the MC, he's pretty down to Earth. I just hope he doesn't become arrogant bcuz of his newfound powers and starts acting thoughtlessly

    Ch 2 Vine inscriptions
    Celestial body
    Oriental · Blessedcreation
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  • Alter_Ch
    Alter_Ch2yr
    Comentou

    What an interesting start. The words at the end are quite foreboding.

    Ch 1 Black seed
    Celestial body
    Oriental · Blessedcreation
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