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this is an AI response I'll rate this chapter a 7 out of 10. Good Points: Clear Setting and Atmosphere: The Wizengamot chamber is well described. The room feels busy and tense. The details, like the flying parchment and the presence of key figures, make the setting clear. Effective Dialogue: The conversations between Neville, Augusta, and other characters (like Lucius Malfoy) help show the power struggles and the tension in the room. The dialogue is simple and easy to follow. Interesting Plot Details: The reading of Harry Potter’s will adds a lot to the world-building. It introduces many new details about legacies, titles, and responsibilities. The changes in lordships and the regency assignment for Teddy raise the stakes. Emotional Impact: The reactions of characters—like Hannah’s grief and Neville’s hollow feeling—give the chapter an emotional core. It shows how the loss of Harry affects everyone, even if Neville tries to hide his feelings. Areas for Improvement: Smooth Transitions: The chapter moves quickly between different parts of the meeting. Smoother shifts between speakers and scenes might help the reader follow the action more easily. Dense Exposition: The will reading is heavy with details. Consider breaking up some of the long passages with more character reactions or dialogue to make it easier to digest. Character Emotions: While the facts are clear, adding more details on how Neville feels about being named regent or how he processes the will could add more depth to his character. Clarify Stakes: There are hints of conflict with families like the Malfoys, but the chapter could benefit from a little more clarity on how these issues might affect the characters in the near future. Questions for Further Clarity and Future Development: Neville's Regental Role: How does Neville truly feel about being given the responsibility for Teddy? Does he see it as an honor, a burden, or both? Augusta's Reactions: What is Augusta thinking during the will reading? Does she show any signs of worry or is she purely focused on control? Family Tensions: How do the tensions between families like the Malfoys and the Longbottoms affect Neville? Will these conflicts play a bigger role later? Emotional Aftermath: What will Neville do after the will reading? Will he have a moment alone to process his feelings about Harry’s death and the new responsibilities placed on him? Next Steps for the Next Generation: Since this story is about caring for the next generation, how do you plan to introduce this theme in the upcoming chapters? Will there be new characters or scenes that show hope and rebuilding?

i understand that nathaniel knew something, i just want him to know everything

did i miss something?

good, just hope its not harem, like harry can duck anyone but not at the same time with romace involved, playboy and harem are diffrent things

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are you sure it was not it had properties of both gum and rubber?

i want nathaniel to know in hevane that his son, indeed loved him and that it was all lucius fault