This feels like im reading a Y/n Wattpad fanfic😂😂

…The MC is a bratty edgy teenager? Good to know.

Look im not trying to sound like im complaining or anything but, he can quite literally do anything else to ease his anger (like going to the Gym and working out) the way you introduced him to smoking was what made me feel as if you only did it to make him ‘look cool’ i mean Hiroki a 15 year old smokes for the first time ’smokes like a pro or smokes like he already smoked before’. I enjoy the fic, I really do its just the smoking part feels a little forced.

RAAAAHHHHHH NEW CHAPTER GOOD RAAAAHHHH!

U got it, no disrespect but im not reading all that.

so far there have been 2 people (Cassandra and The one he’s fighting now) stated that his fighting style is MEDIOCRE (meaning not bad but not that good). And evrry fight we’ve seen its only been him spamming quirk (other than Shoto).

There were multiple statements saying that he was MEDIOCRE AT BEST in hand to hand combat. I never said he didn’t train I just said he doesn’t train his physical attributes and only relies on his quirk. Besides that whole fight with his maid was him using his quirk not really using H2H.

But thats with Chrsed energy. If he could get his eye back it would be good, but the only reason Reverse cursed energy worked was by having cursed energy. He is in the MHA verse and they don’t have cursed energy.

Why do people think that giving any character a cigarette makes them automatically cool? Its just cringe, seeing how hard you’re trying to force a character to “look cool”.

So he not gettimg his eye back? Him only having one six eyes? And I can’t even get mad at the fact that he lost really from what I read he doesn’t really train in the physical department solely relying on his quirk.

He doesn’t have Infinity active

Why would he need to train chakra manipulation when he has the Six-Eyes?

Beat and abuse a child?

Yeah…No, can’t do it, sorry. Enjoyed it at the beginning though.

I will lengthen my meat sword enough so it coils around you like a snake enters your mouth and paints your insides with sticky white sauce.

These are my EXACT THOUGHTS. They complain and Bash characters then do the thing they bashed the characters about. To them if they don’t do it then its not okay.

+1

Why is it the Question mark box when they speak?

Aint she like 13?

Seperate the Paragraph next time, long paragraphs tend to be skimmed over or skipped most of the time because they are hard to read.