The New God Of Destruction

So, first thing's first, I'm at chap 11(that's all there is), and it's pretty good. so far, the MC, a man reborn in an AU original timeline, is consistent with what his character has been predetermined to be, and the fights don't feel drawn out. The writing is good for webnovel standards; I don't see too many inconsistencies. All in all, it's got a good start and a lot of potential.

After wanting to make the MC waste his time fixing a universe with a different timeline, in chapter 13 he became a slave? spare me[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Just awesome work. He is shown to be using his power efficiently and capable of killing his enemies no need to worry about the plot so much good work. Staying true to techniques and power level too.

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.... author has no concept of what a story should be plot wise