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You failed when give him so many different abilities. I'm sure the story will be dropped. Cursed Energy isnt chakra, but you use it like it.
Yeah thats what happend when some authors writes AU stories when they don't want to interfere with the canon. No comments, no reviews, no interest from readers. You were too much focused on training and boring things. No offense.
Hypocrite. You're no better than Tendo and Obito. Yeah, you as Danzo the one you had a conflict.
Nothing change. Obito/Tobi is terrorist.
He is terrorist. You know, yes?
Change its name. He doesn't use 10S abilities at all. Maybe from the start you gonna do it but something change your idea and you give him awards like sharingan and rinnegan.
Geez its unbelievable strange. Even with mokuton and MS, Kushina and Minato dying in Kyubi incident. Drop after 192. Disappointing. Dont read.
Yeah another plot love interest without reasons
the last few? y mean 100 last chap literally fiiler?
Sometimes I lose the point of the story. I even now really don't understand how he can spar with Gojo on equal. His technique is piece of shit. Speed, ah. C'mon you need to bypass infinity without DA and binding vows. Oh, rasengan, kirin, katon justu. Geez.. Your MC is really in main character with plot armor.