He mants to save the outside world. In my opinion this motivation is weak, it not personal to him. Why does he want to save the world? what In it for him?

He can't be that powerful right. He just a kid.

How did he find Eren's home? Shiganshina is very big.

But the story is going weaker. Mc is following the original aot plans. I want something original.

I have no problem with Eren's pov, if he's doing something completely different from the original story. But in your case you are just repeating the original. Although I will stick around longer to see if you improve your storytelling skills.

If you are following original anime, then there is no point in showing Eren's pov, we all already know it. Just show mc's pov.

It trun out more well that I thought. Author 👍

He's a assassin, does he care about innocent dying though?

Yeah, that was what I was saying. It's looks more cool this way. 😎

He should eat Grisha, he's a dead man anyway.

We too. I like villain story with gore.

In my opinion, he doesn't need to wait for Eren to grow and become stronger right. He should get the founder right away.

what was so hard fighting a 5m Titan while being one of the 9 titans?

He doesn't really needs to nit his finger. His ribs were crushed, it was already enough to transform.

We need the scenes where his intelligence is shown not just told.

what's there to survive? just stay inside the wall and relax. From where I see it you should make a more concrete and good goal for the mc.

Yeah, it will be more great if he doesn't just run after women's and have his own plans.

Please,put a cover fast. I nearly ignore it.

That's good.

Sorry😅. I forgot.