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JacksNovels

JacksNovels

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READ! my novel (original work) ok bye :)

2022-01-15 UnidoJersey
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10h

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38
  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Duncan_Phelps

    100% cannon

    "Of course, I came! After all, it's not like I had any plans to run away…or anything…"
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Duncan_Phelps

    ong 😍😍

    <In regards to his appearance, he notably fits in the cardinal category of a normal high school student, at least when he's not displaying his lethal intentions. In addition to that, his raw coat of far-flung tawny hair fits well with his raven absent eyes.>
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Duncan_Phelps

    I can verify your statement, but I'm actually 6,6 but I do pull hella girls. But I do recall you having three girlfriends at one time while owing 62 BMW.

    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Postado

    just wanted to say the cover art is amazing! I love it. Second, this story is sick, the storyline is amazing and the fluent flow of the dialogue and action scene is great. Dope work author! :)

    Dimensional Overhaul
    Fantasia · DymenS
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    going to be uploading ch12 and ch13 on Thursday at 7pm, including the new writing style, hope you like it! 🤫

    Ch 12 HOHB - announcement/future changes...
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou
    "How should I say it... Well, a scythe is indeed a cool weapon, but it's incredibly hard to master it. It's as long as a spear with a blade that is quite heavy, that's why, are you sure you want to use this weapon?"
    The embodiment of a new world
    Fantasia · Karme
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    *Indefinitely (if your feeling sparky 😁)

    "Good, now that everyone had a weapon, I want you to fight another student. However, only weapons are usable, you can't use any spell. And if I see you cheating, I won't hesitate to expel you from this class definitely."
    The embodiment of a new world
    Fantasia · Karme
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Postado

    disgusting. I gave you the benefit of the doubt because you said you would read my novel, but this is disgusting. The first chapter is inhuman. the first chapter is just staight up r•pe. and if some part of your deluted mind, thought that it would create whatever you imagined, I can asure you it didn’t. you could of just said they were killed, but NOOO. you had to go the pathetic route and say that Ariana’ s mother and other female chrachters were rap•d constantly in front of Ariana, and then killed. pathetic dude.

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Karme

    you’ll have to wait and see…

    Ch 10 HOHB - the slayer of west point…
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    I recommend you add some spaces between this paragraph, I got lost sometimes. (only if you want.) 😁

    Este número foi suprimido.
    My Inner Ability System
    Fantasia · LegalWolf
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a M4Glacier

    my boy lmao! your novel has great names aswell. Kyle is a beast of a name.

    "Now before we undertake today's grueling tasks, I shall introduce myself! I know you lots hate long speeches so I'll make it short. Firstly I'll start with the basics. My name is Vinny Yates, I will be your teacher for the next two months, teaching you all three classifications of yex.
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a M4Glacier

    got it I’l keep that ln mind next time, thank you.

    "I will observe your performances and grade you all orderly and equitably. With this in mind, out of the thirty-eight students present in this quarter, only six students will be selected for the Orofell Tournament." Instructor Yates sternly utters with authority.
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    great chapter, the flow between Kyle and the maid was solid.

    Ch 3 Meet the Villain - (2)
    The Author Villain
    Fantasia · M4Glacier
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Postado

    Wow The start of it was great and goes right into it whitch I personally love. Kyle is a beast from the start sounding evil af, and the description and flow is great. keep up the work author. 👍

    The Author Villain
    Fantasia · M4Glacier
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    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    bros already sounds evil

    Red blood slowly dripped out of the corner of my lips. But instead of any apparent pain that should have been on his face. Rather a smile of satisfaction bloomed on his face. Exhaling deeply, a croaky voice escaped from his mouth.
    The Author Villain
    Fantasia · M4Glacier
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Kasuma

    that was on purpose, to show to importance’s of what Brenner said. so I cut it down. hope that makes sense :)

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Postado

    Great start, after a couple of chapters in, it already looks good af. The start was also amazing as well and the narrative is good af. Also loved that you wrote a review that wasn't 5/5 on your novel, really shows your character. (I could never lol)

    The Last Twila
    Ficção Científica · RaiyAkumu
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Respondeu a Koffeee

    this is my new all time favorite comment

    "...fuck you"
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou

    hope you liked this chapter :)

    Ch 1 HOHB - new beginnings...
    The Hierarchy of High Bridge Academy
    Fantasia · JacksNovels
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  • JacksNovels
    JacksNovels2yr
    Comentou
    "Ryan please don't do this we're brothers, please don't expel me. We both know I killed him for you."
    Tales of the Galaxys
    Ficção Científica · Jacob_Westbrook
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