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Kayle_Mighty

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2022-01-02 UnidoGlobal
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  • Kayle_Mighty2 months ago
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    If you don't mind a slow novel, then you can give this a try, however, This novel is bland. 1200 chapters in and I finally am putting it down. There's nothing in this novel that interests me, I just kept reading without a reason. The Mc is boring, has no ambition, and that's fine. While I find it annoying at some parts, it's actually fine, he just wants a peaceful, quiet life. The story could've done without the fmc. 1200 chapters in and we still don't know anything at all about the fmc except her name. She barely ever talks, and when she does talk, its only about the Mc doing something for her. Her power level is unknown, but it is shown that she's super powerful, to the point where she crushes all those considered to be the strongest around, which makes no sense, since she was "injured and fleeing" at the start of the novel. Like I said, she adds absolutely nothing to the story. This novel is NOT a romance novel, despite the tag. 1200 chapters and not even a glimpse of something romantic. The relationship between the Mc and the fmc is nothing more than a normal employee and employer relationship.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    How can you write that a game got released 3 hours ago, but the main character chose to create a character in the game “on the newest server that has has been launched for half a year?” Btw all this happened in two paragraphs. In the first chapter. Screw this.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    This novel could’ve been much better, however, this is just another author who wrote a novel with a brain dead MC and tried to pass his stupidity off as comedy. Very poor attempt at being funny. Sadly it ruined the novel. The other issue was the fights. Yeah it’s an attempt at writing a comedy novel, but the fights are the worst I’ve ever seen. The author doesn’t know how to create a balance between seriousness and his terrible sense of humor. I have no idea how this even has a 3.9 rating.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    Nevermind, I dropped it again. The story got so good when he finally set his mind towards a goal, but then it got ruined. The whole situation with Aina and Rychard was so stupid and uncalled for. And some people will say “but Aina’s personality got reset” but Idgaf. She still had her memories. Allowing another guy to court her was bs, and it was bad enough, but somewhere along the line it suddenly turned into a situation where they’re about to get married. Rychard was absolutely unnecessary to the story. He got beaten, went home, used a story to have a go at The Linux family which is Leonel’s mother’s family. You’re telling me, that every random person that hears the name ‘Morales’ will immediately know that they’re an extremely powerful family, and look at Leonel a bit warily, however, a guy from a 6th dimensional family somehow had no idea who they were? Really? And he was spreading a story about leonel’s mother having a child with a “nobody” and yet, the people around him couldn’t tell that that “nobody” is from a 7th dimensional family? Let’s agree that the story was kept secret. When they spread the story and mentioned the name ‘Morales’, nobody thought about questioning wether he’s related to the morales family or not? They just went with “haha, she married a nobody and gave birth to a piece of trash.” And how convenient that it wasn’t until Leonel almost killed Rychard that somehow they realized that “oh, he’s a Morales.” For all the good writing that was put into this novel, this arc ruined it for me, big time. Doubt I can continue.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    My previous comment was a bit hasty. I picked it back up a few days later and less than 100 chapters later, he finally had a change in mindset. That’s really good. It doesn’t change my opinion that this was too late in the story though, unless the story is going to last for more than 3k chapters.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    I have to say, while the story is quite decent, I dropped it because of the mc. There’s absolutely no way I’m going to read a novel, where up to 700+ chapters in, the mc doesn’t have a goal. He’s working towards nothing, just getting thrown around in situations. The other thing, is his personality. He’s a Hypocrite. Plain and simple.His. “Righteous” personality is cover for his real personality, and everyone around him can see it except him. He makes quite a few stupid mistakes, and according to how it’s written, he grows mentally each time, but the only reason we believe that is that the author writes it. He absolutely doesn’t change. At first it was bearable, but it got to a point where The mc starts making the same mistakes over and over. And even when his grandfather told him how hypocritical he was, he felt his worldview changing, yet the idiot actually escaped from the reality instead. To hold onto his “good” personality. The other problem is Aina. Honestly, I love her character. However the entire novel is built around her. Everything the mc does is focused around her. She knows that the mc is hiding his subconscious thoughts, knows that it’s dangerous with how he’s acting, yet she’s like “I don’t want him to change”. What finally caused me to lose hope, was the arc when they entered Valiant Mountain. The mc actually gave his dictionary to Aina. For absolutely no reason. The dictionary is a treasure his father created for him because he lacks knowledge. It’s also a lab and his abode, and also has everything stored inside. So he needs it. Yet he gives it to Aina, who is way more knowledgeable than he is and has absolutely no need for it. I just couldn’t keep going.

  • Kayle_Mightya year ago
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    “He was unsure wether he should show his true ability.” This line got repeated in so many different ways so many different times that it became annoying. Literally every arc. The author tries to create a main character who is low key, however the mc loves putting himself in the spotlight. The mc will literally go on and on about hiding his ability and then he randomly goes to a ruin-which he absolutely doesn’t need to go because it’s pointless, and he gains nothing-and in that ruin he will run rampant and become the center of attention, and then, in his words “it doesn’t matter if they know how strong I am, they can’t do anything to me anyway, I’m strong”, then goes back outside pretending to be weak when everyone already knows how strong he is. And somehow, even though they all know, by the next 20 chapters or so, everyone magically forgets that he’s super strong, and someone will mess with him and then, like clockwork, “Lin Huang was pondering wether or not he should show his true ability.” This was especially true once he went to the great world. He was so much more powerful than everyone but he kept trying to hide his power, while making himself the center of attention. Then he gives an evasive answer and tries to be mysterious every time someone asks how strong he is. I have no idea how I finished this novel, but I really regret wasting my time. I should’ve stopped early. Honestly, the concept is ok and I see what the author was trying to do, but it became hot garbage real fast. I just continued since I was already in it.

  • Kayle_Mighty2 years ago
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    After struggling, dropping the novel and then picking it up again, I’m finally quitting at 1354. I seriously have a ton of complaints but I’ll just put the main one here. The author made it too obvious that he’s just trying to drag this novel as long as possible. We all know the mc can pickup attributes, and when he picks up attributes from people stronger than him it works even better since he grows much faster, even making him jump levels earlier in the novel. However, The author basically nerfed the mc as soon as he left earth so that he could drag the story. That’s not even the main reason why I’m dropping it. The tipping point for me was during the war on the 29th defense planet. Three eternal ranked were involved in that war. The human eternal wounded one of the devils and then another showed up ready to clash. But guess what? NO ATTRIBUTE BUBBLES FROM THEM, the author didn’t even mention them dropping attribute bubbles, the story just continued like normal with the mc picking up attribute bubbles from everyone else on the battlefield. Of course, why would the author let him pickup attribute bubbles from them? This would make him get stronger too quickly, and since he just wants to milk this story as much as possible, he just didn’t want it to happen, so he just didn’t let it happen. In the earlier part of the novel the mc grew so quickly but ever since he left earth he grew SUPER Slowly, even while coming in contact with people much much stronger than him. It slowly became a novel where it’s just face slapping. Someone Looks down on mc because his level is weak, but of course, he has so many things that can make him fight across realms. Boom, their face gets slapped. I also have to mention how terrible the story became later on. The author started dragging fights that could be done in a single chapter, making them take 5-6 chapters or sometimes even more! I also can’t forget to add that the author started writing entire chapters describing information about attribute bubbles. It wouldn’t be bad if he did it like a litrpg or something but nah, it’s just a filler chapter that’s there to make up numbers. I’ve never been so angry about a novel in my life. It had so much potential at the start. I

  • Kayle_Mighty2 years ago
    Respondeu a Toyin_Daniel

    You clearly have no clue what you're reading. It's like you're just looking at words, not reading. In chapter 56 when the mc gave her the 1000 years of cultivation, he realized that it wasn't much, since it didn't affect his cultivation at all because his realm was so high, he was surprised and described it as "just a drop in the Ocean". After reading that, just thinking for a second would tell you that if 1000 years is described as a drop in the ocean then 100 thousand years sounds a lot but it's not enough for a big change. He got the 100 thousand years cultivation as a return and it brought him up one minor realm. The cultivation wasn't enough to bring him to the paragon realm. He saved what was leftover and after stabilizing his mental state he used it to bring him to the very peak of his current realm. The novel isn't very good. I dropped it. It's fine to criticize a novel but at the very least, try to think before you criticize something. Try to think and see if what you're saying actually makes sense. Sometimes people like you will do this and put out some bad reviews about a situation when truthfully, the problem is your own stupidity.

  • Kayle_Mighty2 years ago
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    This novel was fine before it got to around chapter 100. After chapter 100 it became hard to read. The chapters became longer because of a whole lot of unnecessary dialogue. The dialogue could've been much shorter, and the chapters would be easier to read.