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20 people beg to differ just in this review, I'm pretty sure that there are two or three more enlightened reviews so, yeah, we did, you just like trash and that's okay. It's not like you can't read it because it isn't good. I will just put you into the category of MGA fans in my heart, which is synonymous to braindead for me.
Bruh, she looks like Rock Lee real life if he as a female
He literally starts saying that likability is relative, so there's no need to come to my review and say shit, he could just go and do his, because, I didn't like it and that's what my OP is saying. So there's no point in making his comment. Of course, if you had two braincells working, you could have realized that.
Just re-read your own answer and consider it yourself, does it look like death? Yes? No? If it looks like death, he can escape, if it doesn't, he will just live normally
I don't have to consider anything cause if you're going with tech as the main ability there's really no need to waste time reading it cause that's the worst possible idea for a SW fanfic. The wish fulfilment factor isn't there. Also it's borderline as unlikable as being a transmigrator and telling people about it in the story.
The protagonist is unlikable and another one of those kinds of Immortals without ambitions or personality who live a miserable life and where no matter what happens you can tell from the start that the ending will probably be very bad, not to mention the overall development. Also there's way too much being told and nothing happening.
Disgusting
Have you not understood yet that this immortality is above all concepts? A timeloop is in this case just another form of death, and therefore, he can escape it.
Racial advantage doesn't matter once your mastery of the force reaches a certain point
It's not, have you seen anything from EU? even the best tech was built with the force as the basis.
Thankfully our boy is too much of a genius, the kind that can move mountains with his own efforts
My guess is that he has some condition, a medical one that makes him have to eat sugary food often
He did kick light a couple of meters away from him so it probably checks out
truly the goat
Nah, if it was him at this time, he would be kicking someone while barefoot and eating cake in the process.
Eru-diction? Eru-tic? Or perhaps you would prefer... eru-ption?
He's still naive and innocent in regards to how this world works, but he will soon learn of how violent it actually is and how stupid it was for him to act like that, I wanted Saito to be more resistant to his forced labor situation, but also learn the darker aspects of this world, I'll be using real-life examples of how slaves were punished in the story to make him wake to reality, while also revealing that slavery is a common thing in this world. Thanks to my modifications of the magic system though, Saito won't be so defenseless in the future as he starts to learn how to use his runic name, and the new feature of the runic name system, evolution.