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The story is nice, at the beginning the punctuation was kind of not that great as well as the grammar. What is nice is that the auth looks at the points he needs to work on and gradually improves. the author listens to the readers advice which is always nice. Keep working hard!
Great work!
Well for starters you have no way of knowing whether I have mental issues. Just because I write this type of stuff doesn’t mean I do it. also it’s rude and disrespectful to tell someone you don’t even know that they have mental issues. its just a story so I dont know how that determines that I have metal issues.