Grant_Caile_7221

Basically the MC is Jesus and everyone else sucks. First time holding a sword, he is a sword master. same with a spear because he used spears in a computer game like 10 years ago??? He notices stuff immediately that every other player in the game just happens to not notice. This is the most popular game in the world that people spend time studying the game but they don't understand basic things like how attribute points are given. But guess what our super awesome, amazing MC figures it out immediately. He someone how defeats a level twenty boss at level 1 because he "uses the environment". Is every other player just brain dead? Basically he does not have to train at anything and becomes a master in anything he does on the first try. While the game system seems good, the MC ruins the story. You can make a prodigy mc without him being a literal god.

Im really trying to enjoy this novel but the MC is ruining it for me. He has the memory of a goldfish. Even thought he memories of his previous life he doesn't seem to know anything. He only remembers stuff when other people mention it. He also barely uses his knowledge which should be his biggest advantage. He basically wasted the 60 days he had before the beta test. 3 days into the beta and some players are catching up to him. For someone who is supposedly trying to save the world, he spends an awful amount of time screwing around when he should be progressing. For example for someone who was supposedly a blacksmith in his previous life he does not know how to open a smithy. He also does not know his way around any of the cities. He "forgets" everything and only remembers when it is convenient for the story. He basically acts like a normal player who has never played the game before. He did not even remember that killing monsters above your level gives you more XP. There are a ton more examples that I forgot. Basically he is a noob who once in a while knows "remembers" stuff. Getting really frustrating to read.

I get that he if from the country side and has never played a cultivation game before so it makes sense that he starts out clueless. What does not make sense is his utter inability to learn. Even if he is new to the genre, after several months of playing he should understand the basics. He makes no attempt to learn from whats around hime or look at forums or ask questions to learn anything and stays the same naive idiot for a 1000 chapters. Isn't he in college. He acts like a 2nd grader. No, even a second grader would learn the game after playing as much as he does. He is a new born baby. At this point it just gets frustrating to read. Especially when the author said he would only be like that for 10 chapters. Also notice how the author does not respond to any comments about his stupidity but responds to every comment about if there will be romance or a harem. It is an easy fix too, so why as an author would you make your main character like this. ruining your own novel and for what.

in literally any other house that they could buy with their share of the house. Why does he insist on keeping this large house he does not need?

Okay so I just read until like chapter 410 and author has still not mentioned what the 30 plus bloodlines he stole like 200 chapters ago are. Is he using them? no. Is he combining them? no. is he not using them and just letting them sit there without mentioning them again for 200 chapters? yup. He is always saying how he needs to get stronger yet he ignores all his bloodlines??? Why? Utterly ridiculous. Fix your damn novel author. Dropped.

I don't know why the author decided to write a bloodline system novel when he obviously does not care about the bloodlines or abilities. While the novel in itself is good, the author constantly leaves out the descriptions of new skills and bloodlines and leaves us trying to pick up the pieces in our heads . Like he will kill some people and get their bloodline but he won't mention what they are for like 20 chapters. When he kills like 20 criminals and then sits down to combine them the author shows like one combination and then just throws in a line like "Then I combined 4 other abilities" and then like never mentions it again. If your gonna write a system novel, you should put effort into showing us what bloodlines he collects and creates. You would think that would be a big part of something literally named the bloodline system. But I guess no, the author just jumps over crucial details for no real reason. Also when he combines abilities the system tells him how compatible they are, but no matter what it says the mc always combines it anyway. Also For the first 200 chapters the mc like doesn't take other peoples bloodlines unless they attack him, like why can't he go out and hunt criminals or something. he can get unlimited bloodlines but he only takes like 4. WHY???? Don't get me started on the random abilities the system gives him like dash for no other reason than being a system novel. Would be a lot cooler if the mc got his abilities more from bloodlines then random system powerups. Again the author should just put more of a focus on the bloodlines. Why write a story focused on them then just gonna ignore them. Leaves me confused and disappointed.

wait he takes his bloodline at least right, im at chapter 200 and im gonna drop this if he didn't

Reviewed at chapter 111 Ok so at first I was really excited cause we don't often see speedster novels, but its kinda a mess If you were hoping for an action packed speedster novel, us watching him grow with the system, the mc getting faster and faster, you will be disappointed The entire novel so far has been a magic academy novel where he hasent really gotten stronger at all Also basically the first 90 chapter are the just the FIRST DAY of school, yes you read that right Now hes basically thrown into a fight between two S ranks on like the 2nd day, and the reason why could have so easily been avoided This is a good place to add that characters have really poor motivations and kinda of all make terrible choices its really hard to read I am gonna give it a few more chapters and hope he uses his system a little to get stronger and the story comes together because so far the entire story kinda makes no sense, the plot also seems really forced