Shameless review from the author. Hope you enjoy my entry for 2024! Leave a stone or comment if you did. Or even a review if you liked the story so far! First system novel i attempted!

An interesting start and premise, with an interesting system that left me wanting to read more! Hoping to see more chapters of this novel!!! Hoping to see more of this flame spider and if giving that necklace was worth it!

At this volume actually

Things will change as they progress, don't worry!

There's none, well no romance for the mc and major characters at least

Cool story with some funny dialogue and the sudden change of pace. A fun and neat story all in all.

The opening was very interesting, the writing style is simple to understand but able to give enough information to the reader. And introduces the character and their dynamics. All in all, a good read.

Straight into the point with the start. A cool introduction for the mc, . apart from some grammar issues in a few parts, this novel is a good read.

The opening gave me a good laugh, interesting perspective and the way its used is good, can't find much faults here. All in all its a great novel with a funny start!

I was thinking that the loading would just freeze at 99%

Good soldiers follow orders

I like his style

Nonsense, grammar is voided if we have the other factors at play!

The start is a great hook and the descriptions are very well done, from details of the fights to details of places or locations, a very interesting narrative style and story. Only flaw i could see is the irregular updates.

The narration style is funny and the descriptions are pretty in depth, although the start seemed to be a little rushed, this book overall is a nice read

Man, i wish that was the case for this story, sure hope that's the case

It's free if we use the forbidden technique of......Theft

Nah just walk it off

Top 10 Last words before disaster

Poke it