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Miss_Asriya

Miss_Asriya

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2021-08-26 UnidoGlobal
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    The writing quality meets my standard. I like how the writer describe the emotions and vibes of the characters pretty well. The story development is great, I like how the settings and the characters are introduced. If you like or interested in Basketball, then i reccommend you give this story a try! Good work author!

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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a Mauricio_Negrete

    Noted! Thank you so much!

    Luckily, on her way to the school, she passed by a convenience store just on the highway. She still has time since the traffic isn't that heavy. She grabbed a can of black coffee and chugged it quickly. Then I drove again fast, trying to reach the university on time.
    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Postado

    Outstanding story! I really like how the author is building the characters personality and vibes really well. And also, how he explains the Aether system in simple words so I can understand them quickly. The writing needs a little bit of editing, the imagery and story development is great! Keep up the good work author, I'm looking forward for more chapters. This novel is recommendable!

    Epitome of Magus
    Fantasia · AkionF
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    Wow! The plot is outstanding. I really like how the characters are being introduced, it's well constructed and clear. Not to mention the imagery used here is on point. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND THIS! More chapters to come!

    Witch Hunting Love (GL)
    Fantasia · ZeroX0666
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Postado

    As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!

    Galatea: The Last Whisperer
    Fantasia · Missy_Castillo
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Postado

    This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!

    HASSAN
    Realista · Zuleihat
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.

    HIS ENCHANTED LOVER
    Fantasia · zigginah
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    This is amazing. The writing style and the way the author writes the narrative part are amazing. The emotions of the characters and the imagery that keeps the readers immersed is a plus. This is a great novel with great potential. Keep it up author! Great job!

    ReLife: Tale Of A Cuck
    Fantasia · WandererMonk
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a Love_zeesh

    Aww <33 this means a lot, Thank youuuu <333

    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a smiling_osha

    Thank you for the review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story!

    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a AmoreMimosi_001

    Thank you for the review! This means a lot to me <33 Happy Reading!

    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    I believe this story has potential and the characters are well written too. Plus, the narrative is on point. Although it needs to edit a few grammar issues and very short chapters, then aside from all of that, this story is good. Keep it up author!

    Let's Run Away!
    Fantasia · Love_zeesh
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Postado

    If you love werewolves type of novels, then this is perfect for you. The emotional aspects are really on the point where the readers feel immersed in the characters. The plot is sooo good so far and the first chapter is really interesting. Great work author! More chapters to come. Very recommendable.!

    CURSED ALPHA ( Moved to a new link)
    Fantasia · smiling_osha
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    I am loving this! The plot is superb and the way the author write this is amazing. Not to mention the very detailed imagery that makes the readers fully immersed in the story and in the characters' perspective and emotion. Great Work author! This novel have more potential! Very recommendable. Keep it up.

    Novel Del
    Fantasia · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    First of all, the plot is amazing! The first chapters where the main character struggles, is just felt. I mean i am immersed in his life. Great writing also, the way the author writes this novel is very comprehensible, which is a big plus. Great job author! This story have great potential! Keep it up! Very recommendable!

    THE FIRST RAIN (BL)
    Fantasia · Diorcesses
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    This novel has potential! The plot is so good. The way the characters carry their emotions, the author did a great job making the readers immersed in them. However, the grammar department needs a little work BUT overall, I would say this is a great novel. Great Job author! More chapters to come and I am here for it!

    Bloody Saint
    História · AmoreMimosi_001
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a Mel_Aniv

    Thank you for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story ^.^ this inspires me to write more <333

    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Respondeu a Eva_Smith_0875

    Awww <333 Thank you for your feedback. Sooo glad you are enjoying the story!

    A Thunderstorm's Rainbow
    Adolescente · Miss_Asriya
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
    Postado

    I like this novel, especially the first chapter, whereas for a reader, the author successfully made me feel what the FL is feeling, and that is a big star for an author. I am looking froward for more chapters author! Please keep updating more! Great Job!

    Arrogant Billionaire's Innocent beauty
    Urbano · Eva_Smith_0875
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya1yr
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    I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.

    Primordial Versatile Grandmaster
    Fantasia · Mel_Aniv
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