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Miss_Asriya

Miss_Asriya

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2021-08-26 UnidoGlobal
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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
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    The writing quality meets my standard. I like how the writer describe the emotions and vibes of the characters pretty well. The story development is great, I like how the settings and the characters are introduced. If you like or interested in Basketball, then i reccommend you give this story a try! Good work author!

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  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
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    Outstanding story! I really like how the author is building the characters personality and vibes really well. And also, how he explains the Aether system in simple words so I can understand them quickly. The writing needs a little bit of editing, the imagery and story development is great! Keep up the good work author, I'm looking forward for more chapters. This novel is recommendable!

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
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    Wow! The plot is outstanding. I really like how the characters are being introduced, it's well constructed and clear. Not to mention the imagery used here is on point. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND THIS! More chapters to come!

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Postado

    As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Postado

    This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Postado

    The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Postado

    This is amazing. The writing style and the way the author writes the narrative part are amazing. The emotions of the characters and the imagery that keeps the readers immersed is a plus. This is a great novel with great potential. Keep it up author! Great job!

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Respondeu a Love_zeesh

    Aww <33 this means a lot, Thank youuuu <333

  • Miss_Asriya
    Miss_Asriya2 years ago
    Respondeu a smiling_osha

    Thank you for the review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story!