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Human Being, Dream Alchemist, Chief of Quietly Judging, Master of None.
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Apologize for the long absence, I was abroad for weeks and just got back home. It saddened me, but I plan to end it here. Have to write my other novels next month. So sorry to say this - I just haven't got the time to change its completion status :'(
Dewi, eaea
Ex-beta? So, it's like rank where people can be replaced after some times?
If he's weak, why is he an alpha?
oh, tebakannya salah besar XD
vibe-nya si ibu ini jd tokoh penting. mungkin calon mertua wkwk
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you. Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D
finally! someone write a believable reaction! T.T
bold of u to assume