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Plot armor, math that doesn't math, writer forgets what he wrote last chapter and changes numbers all over the place. MC getting all the "rare" drops on the first clear. MC has no backbone and is a complete idi**. Example (Spoiler) MC traveled back in time and knew that he would look the same in game as in the real world, but MC didn't hide his face and after some world 1st clears his whole family is put in danger because people figured out his IRL identity... dropped 30 chapters in, horrible read.

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Meh, that's it for me. Dropping this series, a guy with 1STR, 1AGI is running circles around a boss just because he can suddenly use a super human skill from past life? Nah lazy writing, if you wanted the MC to bring with him some of his past experience show them in skills/passives/abilities so that we the reader can understand what's going on. Otherwise you can just pop out a new "hidden skill" when ever and say it was from his past life.

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*As of chapter 389* - You wont be disappointed, try it. My first ever review on WN. Pros: +The writing quality is supreme. +The world building is amazing. +The side characters feel like actual humans (and more..). +The choice of "character/class" is brilliant. +The main "Keiran" grows and develops along with the story. Cons: -Kingdom building might be felt as slow in the start (we have a saying in my country "The one who waits for something good, never waits too long" take that for what you will) -How to balance a "MMORPG" with a novel that situates around a OP class (I have no issue with this point but some people might, hence why I chose to add it) -Some arcs feel a bit slow/drawn out. “Beware the fury of a patient man” - John Dryden Personal conclusion: *My new favorite novel in the MMORPG genre(Top 3 overall). Keep up the fantastic work Mr. Apex, can't wait for more chapters.

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