Usually solitary, so to escape into my silence I write. I write with a mission, I play with words, I print my imagination to each page as mystery unfolds into words.
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ok well I guess the transition or maybe the flow is missing something. A reader should be able to tell.
Unusual but interesting I like it
somehow chapter 2 seems like another story. maybe it should be introduced in the preceding chapters . Chapter three seemed like the actual continuation of chapter 1. but I am following this story, it's nice.👍
needs edit in last line
some editing will benefit. I think it's good otherwise. I like it.👍