Superb 👏 you were great when it comes to grammar but more importantly when it comes to the plot of the story. I hope we could build some extra critiques for our story ☺️☺️[img=recommend][img=update]

thank you ☺️ I'll keep working on it 🤗

Like what I thought you were really good in writing. i hope i could learn from you 🤗🤗🙏. Have a blessed Saturday.[img=recommend]