Mrtin_Monarch
My mistakes shape my success
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The author has created an engaging immersive world with interesting characters that leaves one hungry for more content. The writing style is really good and clear and the pacing is normal making the story easy to follow. Highly recommend this series to those who enjoy Chinese novels.
The writing style really captures you, it gives an almost mystical feel that works well with the plot. The plot itself is interesting and immediately has you intrigued and the character interactions are well done. The world is described in a detailed way which makes seem tangible. The author is doing an incredible job and I would highly recommend this work. Will follow and read this one for sure.
Ayo what is bro doing😭 get the FBI here
Alright this book is interesting. The main character is intriguing and the overall plot is very interesting. The character interactions are enjoyable making the book a fun read. The writing quality is not the best but the story gets across to the reader. This story has great potential and I hope the author continue this interesting work.😁
The system tripping frfr🤣🤣🤣
They finna really killed my bro for finding an item😭
"Already waiting there was all her relatives" since there were many individuals waiting for her try writing "Already waiting there were all her relatives"
"Told" would be better if you used tell like "did I not tell you" since the convo is happening in the present for them
"She does not resemble other little girls" Try changing it to "She was unlike other little girls"
I would recommend changing Sat to Sit on his lap And taught to teach
"the master who was still do not wish" I think It would have made more sense to say "the master who does not wish for the miss to marry"
"whom she met and fell in love WITH" That would make for easier reading