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probably mtl, who tf uses "myriads" in a fanfiction other than a mtl.

I seriously recommend the author to do a rewrite, or at very least fix the chapters grammar, my head hurts just trying to read, if the author does that i will maybe give another try reading this.

i guess it is deteriorating, some phrases are missing some words and last chp there's some misspell if I'm not wrong.

This shit is so peak 10/10 brainrot, sadge that there's only 10 chapters's

At least fix the character names they keep changing every chapter.

It's she supposed to be Bea???? when did she became sonia?

What happened to the original story? Did you reboot it?

It's the nichirin blades that decapitate demons that make them die, not the breathing method they only improve the human body.

What do you expect of people on Webnovel, recently a lot of fics are Chinese MTL and people don't even bother translating or fixing character names.