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RizIN

RizIN

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2021-04-10 UnidoGlobal
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  • RizIN
    RizIN6 days ago
    Comentou

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

  • RizIN
    RizIN12 days ago
    Respondeu a Neo_of_Spades

    That's a wonderful idea! I hope the author implements it. I can already imagine what would happen with three spawns in a single era—something like the oldest always clashing with the youngest, while the middle one tries to keep the peace. Just like your typical sibling dynamics

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Respondeu a RizIN

    It seems that the other platform is under the same company, and not just you, but all authors on this platform also have their novels available there.

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Respondeu a RizIN

    Also i notice your novel is available on more than one platform. I don't know why you did it but l strongly suggest sticking to a single platform. Based on my experience, many platforms have strict and often petty policies regarding exclusivity, which can lead to complications such as shadow banning or reduced visibility, considering the novel already has over 100 chapters, it's very strange that the views is very low.

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Postado

    This novel initially shows immense potential, captivating readers with its engaging premise, well-structured grammar, and minimal errors. It starts as a promising story that hooks the audience with its intriguing world-building and very descriptive to detail. However, as the chapters progress, the story tends to feel unnecessarily prolonged, with excessive focus on side characters. The original MC, who seemed to hold great promise, is sidelined early on and his actions is very minimal. This shift in focus detracts from the overall narrative, making it harder to stay invested in the core storyline. Additionally, the background details and power scaling for each character in this novel become increasingly confusing, leaving readers struggling to keep track of the plot's internal logic. Fortunately, the latest chapters address some of these issues, introducing a resolution that feels like a course correction. However, the addition of new character especially two new main characters as part of this fix comes across as somewhat abrupt, making the transition feel slightly forced. While these changes show an effort to improve the story, they also risk alienating readers who were invested in the original setup. In conclusion, while the novel's potential is undeniable, its execution falters in parts, particularly in character focus and narrative consistency. The recent adjustments are a step in the right direction, but a more gradual approach.

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Postado

    This novel has so much potential, but the author kinda ruined it because so many things don’t make sense. First, in the early chapters, why didn’t the MC’s parents teach him anything, even though they knew the world was very dangerous?even though there are explanation for this but tbh is still don't make sense, Second, when he became a sage and could potentially defeat a paragon, he was somehow scared of someone weaker than him (academy arc). There are many more issues that I can’t write in this section. The worst part is the author’s inconsistent upload schedule and the constant dragging of the plot with clickbait titles. I hope the author can fix these issues, stop making excuses, and do more action. Tbh, I don’t entirely blame the author for making a novel like this because this platforms are a mess, unlike the good old days when authors genuinely had a passion for writing. Thank you.

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Comentou

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

  • RizIN
    RizINa month ago
    Comentou

    What about Divine mana, Demonic mana, etc.? I remember hearing these terms, how are they different from regular mana?

  • RizIN
    RizIN4 months ago
    Comentou

    It's interesting how William has become the complete opposite of Nephis. While Nephis embodies light, fire, warmth, and life, William represents darkness, frost, cold, and death. Ironically, they have the same look almost like siblings, with the main difference being their eye colors and almost the same true name. Am i right?

  • RizIN
    RizIN4 months ago
    Comentou

    Dante totally reminds me of Sairough from Highschool DxD. Both have insanely strong convictions and rely mainly on their physical strength