LordNiggaThe1st
There will be a day when this sky will be broken for my sake, when this land will collapse because of me, on that day I can say that I have everything...
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I have a question, where did you get the idea for this fanfic, I ask this because its VERY unique, I feel that you got it from a manga called "eminence in the shadows" but thats just my thoughts, you get a free 5 stars since you have 50 chaps on your other novel, so I trust that you will make it far with this one
yeah its from a line in his song gucci gang
instas kill? you mean instant kill
zombie's don't speak, they are mindless things with no intelligence
what does that mean? stunt mental growth
I hate how he's wasting wishes on them, but hey its your novel do what you want. do what you love
you shoul'dve had them say Less gooooooo instead of lets go
I always knew that, he has been mentioned in the anime and manga multiple times not to mention that any person can figure some info about him by just googling him
I like your response, keep doing the novel even though there are MANY things that are at fault I think that you will turn out fine, well thats if you don't drop it anyways hope happy writing
hmmm from I don't know if I got this correct since your way of describing isn't very good but from what I am reading, rukh are basically what make humans? its kinda like in aot when it turned out that titans were humans, right? like what Aladdin is he is human but was made from rukh, that is the creation of a magi, well i am probably wrong
also try not to say there full name, some people will not know that Uraltugo Noi Nueph is actually ugo, so don't use the full name just use ugo like everyone else and do this for characters that have very complicated names, just shorten them to the names that everyone is familiar with not the complicated one
ahh finally a character that I know
I am back from my google searching journey, and I have learned that solomans son is a bad guy, so I would like to ask, why would he save him? I'd like to assume that solomans character is kind but with a fusion of those generic wuxia cultivation novel mc's
the paragraph is to long, and the explanation on whats going on is trash, I am starting to have doubts on whether or not I should put power stones into this novel
why is it that the name on the cover of your novel is different from the name of your novel?
I like the fact that you decided to use paragraphs, and especially the paragraph spacing, most authors just write a block of text and call it a chapter and some sometimes space paragraphs but then forget to its just a constant on and off pattern, and I hate ok I HATE IT when they make a paragraph long with no periods, its like reading a sentence that has no commas
I have high hopes for this, number 1 being that this novel actually has a schedule. I usually see only original novels with schedules but just from the fact that you have a schedule I can tell that you are organized, second being that you decided to do a magi novel, wich btw you don't see everyday. I hope that you will not drop this but nothing in this world is 100% empty promises do exist